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Metal Universe

Author: Zmp
Eastern Fantasy
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Read ‘Metal Universe’ Online for Free, written by the author Zmp, This book is a Eastern Fantasy Novel, covering ACTION Fiction, ROMANCE Light Novel, ADVENTURE Internet Novel, and the synopsis is: Nano metal organism embedded warriors ruling in the metal universe searching for power.And they unlocked a secret.In thi...

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Nano metal organism embedded warriors ruling in the metal universe searching for power. And they unlocked a secret. In this novel, Everyone has fair chance, but that lead to unfair. MC could get Cheat Code, so as all other too. Everyone is fighting to get it. So, all cultivators are not innocent and all innocent cultivators don't exit.

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Skepparn
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Honestly this was the worst grammar I’ve seen in a story for a long time It gets so bad that at ch3 he mixes new words to describe the same thing and cause of the ****ty grammar there’s no way to enjoy the story even tho it may be a good one

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I like the story and way you try put more logic in story and it doesn't have much cliche in it but it need some refinement in grammar, fix what you can and use some free tools that are available on internet

Zmp
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This five things are nothing to do with me. Writing Quality, Stability of updates, Story development, Character design and World background. . I am not good at writing, language, linguistics, and drawing manga. I am only good at creation and logic. . So forget about these rules, Just read it and if you like it, just rate it as how much you like it. Thank, Zmp

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