Honestly this was the worst grammar I’ve seen in a story for a long time It gets so bad that at ch3 he mixes new words to describe the same thing and cause of the ****ty grammar there’s no way to enjoy the story even tho it may be a good one
Zmp
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LIKEZmp:Thank for comment, . But Naruto Author created Ninja system, One Piece created Devil Fruit, and many famous Asian Author created something. But they did not write in English. . These all were translated. . I created Metal Form. Why could someone wait until I could hire an English translator?
I really wanted to know is that, my writing is same like a machine translate? Could you please answer me without other influence.
TigerBlooImmortal:Write it in your language and have someone translate it.
Machine translations translate exactly, that is why the Grammar is bad as every language has a different grammatical structure. For example if I was to put I want beans into google translate for Spanish it would respond with yo quiere frijoles but it is supposed to say " yo quiero frijoles"
Zmp:I really wanted to know is that, my writing is same like a machine translate? Could you please answer me without other influence.