Really you gotta stop making a oc with the names of real characters you just end up ruining everybodies day and your story

Absolute trash plot after he left the dwarfs

Why is everybody this retarddz? It’s stupid and my braincells keep dying when reading this

Honestly perfect timing to kill the mc and replace him with a non chinese retard

Pls edit him being to escape, it’s just plain stupid

Wanna see a hashirama power

Why would you go with a card empowering the girl instead of the mc and attacking them? Isn’t the system supposed to make it out like the mc is op not the girl?

Expected better from this author but so far just plain trash

Why do you keep nerfing the mc? It shouldn’t even be possible for these people to win with all of them vs mc

+1 but only the basics

Snnoying system

Raw?

Is this dropped?

Is the story just a place for the author to post his thoughts after being bullied in middle school

You’ve already nerfed it so it’s just a big oibrary now stop calling it that

Very well written if it was a original story but for a fanfic with tai lung as the mc it was pure trash with a nerf

You need to go to narnia, this mc needs the mental perks so much it’s painful

How come he knows 7-11 is good age to train and how come he knows there is a core? I always thought the conduit theory worked better in hp cause the core thing always bugged me in hp

Helps the first times but eventually you’ll lose all support cause it’s not worth the time to vote for s full week to read your chapter

Way too long, split personality is a trash genre and should never even be attempted