The human Race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward. Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities. Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves. Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open. But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around. He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete. "It is time to feed!" "You must drink human blood within 24 hours" "Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed" Discord link https://discord.gg/a9WfmJh https://www.patreon.com/JSManga
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"Bleh." - Imp An Imp, a monster known to kill with a grin, a demon of the world, a creature of incredible might! Something that no force in the world can stand against! At least that's what the Main Character would like himself to be, the reality is very different, however. Exactly that Imp stumbles along a path of unfortunate fortunes and grows through it, in a world that hates its very existence. It grows more intelligent, more powerful, simply better at whatever it needs to do. Amongst other things, that includes raising children, killing Soldiers, and carving wooden figurines for money.
Sen, the last and most powerful dragon left roaming the skies causing chaos and destruction across the land. When all hope is lost the human race call upon their last hope, a powerful witch. Unable to destroy the dragon the witch uses the last of her power to cast a spell. Sen has not been defeated but has now been reborn as a human. How will Sen live his life now as a human who he once despised and saw as weak? UPDATES DAILY Support below to help me write more chapters P.A.T.R.E.O.N JSmanga for more content and support. https://www.patreon.com/JSManga Discord link https://discord.gg/huTJG43 Post art work and more+
Blessed with unlimited mana, Noah travels the worlds and sees rampant corruption and injustice. Have you seen countless icebergs fall asunder? Have you watched a dragon despair? Follow one man as he overturns the order of the worlds... --- This is a story of fantasy and fiction, events or names used have no relation to the real world. Support the author: ko-fi.com/aduii Newly set up discord server is here! https://discord.gg/KwatGcE
"So, that's how my life ends, what a waste of time it was...". These were the last thoughts of a young man, shot by accident in a fight between local gangs. Little did he know that he would soon wake up in another world, a world of cultivation! This is the story of the whoreson of a wealthy family, of a transmigrator that had no purpose in his previous life, of a demon that will make power his reason to keep on living. Noah Balvan, after he transmigrated, will have to fight against his social status and the many difficulties of the world he was reborn in to obtain the power to stand free in the sky above anyone! Follow me on twitter: https://twitter.com/EoCNovels Discord link: https://discord.gg/CNh28NP If you want to further support me: https://ko-fi.com/eveofchaos https://www.patreon.com/Eveofchaos Cover artist: https://digitalrowye.com/
"I can't die even if I try," Ryder Flynn was one of the strongest Magic Knights. But his life was turned upside down when he was killed because of a glitch in the game. He gained a system and transferred back in time to the time he started playing Divinity. Things take a strange turn when he becomes the King of the strongest demons in the Virtual Realm. That was not enough as he also gained a godly item inside the game, which basically made him immortal. The skill gave him the power that every time he dies, the time rewinds by 1 day. But why did that item follow him to the real world? Life is full of mystery and problems. From the small obstructions like Ancient cultivation families of the real world to the bigger problem that was his own fierce Demon Army in the virtual realm and even bigger problems that was his own system. Why is the virtual world so realistic? Is it really just a game or something more? Warning: Read the Pinned Review by me ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Buy me a coffee and support me on Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/deangel Patreon: Patreon.com/DeAngel Join my discord:https://discord.gg/2AGkydg
#Participating in the Webnovel Spirity awards Spring 2020 Ajax was an orphan who survives a massacre along with his friends but unfortunately gets separated from them. Fortunately, after a turn of events, he successfully gains a system which helps him increase his cultivation, but doesn't know what it is called. But he knows one thing for sure, this system is very powerful and helpful in taking his revenge. "Whoever you are, I am gonna find you", Ajax mumbled himself with a disgruntled expression. In a world where Summoning of an elemental spirit is done through a dream when they are 15 years old, Ajax with the help of a system and his summoned spirits sets out on a journey to seek revenge against the mastermind behind the massacre. 2 chapters daily (At present) Vote through power stones and add this book to your library to support me. Note:- 1) First few chapters have some grammar mistakes but don't worry as you read more chapters you will find less and less of those mistakes and for the starting chapters I will re-edit them when I am free. So, please bear with it for a while. 2) Almost all the premium chapters (Locked chapters) has more than 1001 words. Discord link:- https://discord.gg/kuMT64t Instagram Id:- vinay_raj_16 Support me at Patreon https://www.patreon.com/vinayraj or PayPal https://www.paypal.me/vinayraj14 I don't own the book cover, I just modified it. So if anyone has issues about it let me know.
The fantasy VRMMORPG, Battle Worlds, is one of the most played games in the world. In this game, there's a legendary player that could defeat a "Boss" on his own. His name is Blood(In-Game-Name). Blood is a legendary player that surpassed all the players in the world. He completed hundreds of quest and dungeon raids alone. When Blood was going to log off, suddenly the virtual capsule that he was wearing exploded causing him to die. His soul didn't go to the cycle of reincarnation but it was sucked by something causing him to transmigrate into a body of Goblin. This is a story about a boy that was transmigrated in the body of a Goblin. Follow him as he rises through the ranks and become the most powerful monster in the world. ....... Tags: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, World Travel, Sword and Magic, Late Romance, Tragedy, Game Elements, Non-human protagonist, System, Beast Companion, Gods, Demons, Hero, War, Modern, Slice of Life, Dungeons, Scheme, Conspiracy, Evolution, Cheat, Weak to Strong, Drama, School Life, ....... There's a lot of grammatical error here. I will try to edit every chapter and find an editor to improve the quality of the novel. So I suggest that don't read it if you like perfect novel with no mistake. Also, when reading this don't imagine that you're the MC because you're not going to like it if he did some things that don't fit your mindset. Remember, the MC was not you so don't expect him to do what you're thinking. That kind of shlt doesn't work here. I know some people were doing to while reading, so stop shltlng. Also, remember that the MC isn't a perfect being that could do everything perfectly so stop shltlng if the MC failed to do some easy task. Anyways, I've warned you so don't come back to me in the review crying like a baby. Photo not mine. I only found this on google.
As one of the first players to gain access to World of Falan—the first immersive game worldwide—Roland creates his character as a Mage. However, playing as a Mage is not as fun and easy as he thought. His head even explodes after he casts the very first spell in the game. Stubbornly sticking to his class when most Mages decide to create a new character, Roland gradually discovers tricks of the trade and his unusual talent. This allows him to change people's stereotypes on Mages and to explore the deeply-buried secrets of this game…
The end of all worlds approach. The Demon King Order harvests lives from all manners of living beings. Within this darkness full of despair, a single person bypassed Space-time and returned to before the world collapsed, determined to change the fate of the past. But as time went by, he gradually found that the Apocalypse isn’t quite as simple as he thought… ------------ Translator: La0o9 Link to the WAO glossary page for possible confusing terminologies, a short character list and overall minor spoilers (I recommend not to check the page out until you reach the latest chapter): https://otakutl.blogspot.com/2020/02/wao-glossary.html
This is a brand new story. Survive the darkness, see the light There is no right or wrong, it just depends on which side you are standing on. To be a god, or to be a man. To be good, or to be evil. Just what is...the highest order of weapon that humanity has? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ After a great catastrophe struck, the world was set back many years and humanity started living in anarchy. With time, society started building up again and people were now living in walled strongholds and fringe towns across the land. Humans have also become distrustful and ruthless in an unforgiving society where the strong survive and the weak are eliminated. Growing up in such an era, Ren Xiaosu had to fend for himself. After an incident, he gained supernatural powers...
Lu Ze transmigrated to the interstellar era two thousand years later. The previous owner of this body had lovey-dovey parents and a cute little sister. Although his cultivation talent was ordinary, his life was fulfilling. It could be said to be a dream start. Lu Ze was very happy. However, as soon as he slept, he came to a strange dimension. He almost got taken out trying to fight an one meter tall huge white rabbit. After making the arduous kill, Lu Ze found that things didn't seem to be so simple. After killing prey in this dimension, he could get little orbs that could be used for cultivation. This was going to make him an eternal jungler. But he seemed to be able to hope for domination of the cosmos and invincibility?
Edward, an 18-year-old college student, found himself stuck inside of a dark abyss. "Where am I?" [Spawning Dungeon Champion] "Huh?" Without a word of warning, He found himself in an unfamiliar body being forced to attack trespassers. Will he ever find a way out? Or will he be a tool for endless slaughter? Warning: Due to the nature of the novel the MC will be switching between bodies. That's why the status window was made the way it was. If that's not your thing you might want to skip this one. The progress is not reset though. Discord Server: https://discord.gg/4wtewn7
1 drop of blood = 1-Up Other people game overnight, I game overnight and bleed. Ever since the dimensional storms descended upon Earth, numerous dimensional zones have appeared, bringing with them all kinds of dimensional creatures—Immortals, Buddhas, Devils, Angels, Elves, etc. Yet, all these strange dimensional zones can turn into dungeon instances on my phone. Other people risk their lives adventuring, I spend all my time gaming. Monsters drop dimensional crystals that boost stats, imbue new skills, and join me as Companion Beasts. These Companion Beasts fight alongside me or alone, augmenting me with their skills and strength. Rare monsters in real life? I'll just restart the game with a drop of blood to grind it. I really need a blood transfusion.
Growing up with eccentric materialistic parents who left him in the care of his grandfather for a job overseas, Zhang Heng had learned to adapt and be unfettered by the oddities and challenges in life. But he would soon learn the baffling truth about the world he thought he knew when one day at midnight time froze and he found himself in a world so quiet and still it was deafening. That night, he discovered that he had 24 hours more than everybody else and thus, marked the beginning of his adventures. The mysteries surrounding his newfound ability only deepened when a strange old man claimed to have given Zhang Heng that ‘gift of time’ and recruited the young man to participate in a cryptic ‘life-changing’ game on his behalf. Little did Zhang Heng know that accepting those terms meant embroiling himself in many versions of reality and exposing himself to the hidden secrets of the world—a decision he could never undo.
The age of darkness has arrived. When the rift to an unknown plane suddenly appeared on Earth, monsters invaded, beasts mutated while humans, the once-dominant species fell to the bottom of the food chain. A hundred years later, three of the greatest classes evolve amongst humans: ability users, ancient warriors, and gunslingers. Qin Feng, an orphan of this dark age was tormented just as he awakened his pinnacle level of special ability, barely surviving for ten years in the post-apocalyptic world. Hence, he was reborn...
What would you do if you could control and use your Karma? What if your actions could be repaid right away? Not an obscure and distant promise anymore. Follow Daniel's story as he uses his karmic system to cultivate, cheat, gain and become a sovereign in his world.. and beyond. __________ Discord for those who would like to chat.. or not: https://discord.gg/s9YCkbS
Tips: Only I Level Up (Solo Leveling) - Webtoon Season 2 is start from Chapter 132 In this world where Hunters with various magical powers battle monsters from invading the defenceless humanity, Seong Jin-Woo was the weakest of all the Hunters, barely able to make a living. However, a mysterious System grants him the power of the ‘Player’, setting him on a course for an incredible and often times perilous Journey. Follow Sang Jin-Woo as he embarks on an adventure to become an unparalleled existence through his “Level-Up” system - the only one in the entire world! ------ THIS IS AN OFFICIAL LICENSED TRANSLATION FROM D&C MEDIA Copyright Owner's Information: © Chugong 2017 / D&C MEDIA
In a world where humanity lives in suspended space, children undergo a fishing test when they come of age. Those with immaculate talents have the possibility of becoming great fishing masters. In the endless sea, every life is imbued with a sacred mission. There are fish that can fly, turtles that have absorbed the worldly essence, and whales that can devour the heaven and earth… There are also countless fishers. Fishing is an art. There is an ancient saying: If you can't fish, you might as well be bait.
After the strange phenomenon in the 21st century where animals became Magical Beasts and overturned civilization, humanity was graced by another power called Magic. Controlling Fire? Summoning lightning? Or even manipulating the air?—Children of the next generation started having the ability to control elements. Thus, people called them Magicians. However, how about the sound? Enhancing Broadcast System? Hearing Aids Magic? Humanity has yet to find a good usage of Sound Magician until Kai Carter is born. He, who was born with Extraordinary Hearing, only wants to have a peaceful life. However, the world does not let him so as troubles keep coming into his life. Follow Kai as he uses his extraordinary hearing to give birth to many unique Sound Magics to protect his family and have a peaceful life. Discord: https://discord.gg/HYvMbb4
What’s not to love about my new life after transmigrating into a Pet-centered world? There are mighty creatures that come in all shapes and sizes. They can either be cuddly companions, helpers in your daily life, daring scouts or strong fighters. Or all of the above. Not bad, huh? I have a family, but the fact is completely overshadowed by my younger sister. She thoroughly hates my guts, and she makes sure that I know this. Every. Single. Day. Did I mention that she’s disgustingly talented while I am a bottom feeder? A terribly handsome one at that. I have free rein to run the family business on my own. A small and quaint Pet Store. It should have been great if not for the fact that the previous owner of this body was born with ZERO affinity to handle Astral Pets… It wouldn’t be a proper transmigration without a gimmick or a system to pave my road to greatness, don’t you think? I have one, but I don’t know if I would be better off without it… Welcome to the World of Astral Pets!
Roy's life was nothing special. The only thing commendable was the last few moments when he saved a mother and her child from a drunk driver. ... It's really an egg! Damn it, what kind of monster have I become? Did I fall into Hell instead of making it to Heaven?? Join Roy as he ventures through various worlds with the Custom Made Demon King System—a system that allows Roy to draw anything he can imagine and create it through exchanging souls!
Li Xiandao obtained the ancient Bank of the Universe, but the bank was now totally empty and there were no treasures at all. The only thing it held: a bunch of debts. The Eternal Celestial King borrowed a supreme celestial artifact, promising to pay it back in two pieces in 3,000 years. He will pay an additional piece for every 1,000 years after the expiry date! Moon Celestial loaned a high-quality face, to be returned in 10,000 years. If overdue, she will pay with her life! Time Immemorial Sage loaned 10,000 years in life from the Bank of the Universe in order to break through. After he breaks through, he will pay back 10,000 years. If late, he must pay back 10 times the amount! Li Xiandao looked at these debts and at the empty Bank of the Universe. He made his mind up to become a true expert, to find all these supreme beings to get back the overdue debts one by one! A powerless mortal had became the biggest creditor in the Nine Heavens and Ten Lands and even the entire Celestial World!
He woke up in a familiar world that had vastly changed. His familiar school had become a mystical school that teaches magic, encouraging everyone to become a mighty magician. Outside the city, many wandering magical beasts and monsters attacked and preyed on humans. His world of advanced science changed into one that praised magic. Despite this, his ambition in life, and his social status remained the same; one of the dregs of the society with a struggling father and a disabled step sister that couldn’t walk. However, Mo Fan found that when most people could only practice a single major element of magic, he was a Versatile Mage!
What if a wisp, with zero EQ about human culture and habits, gains the opportunity to cultivate and finally achieve human form? Now he can enter cities, experience technology, and fight his way to the top, right? In this universe where wisps are seen as nothing more than cultivation resources, a wisp stands up to challenge the wisps destiny! Not without causing a lot of misunderstandings on his way, of course… --- Realms: Qi Condensation; Foundation Establishment; Core Formation; Divine Soul; Soul Forging; Void Breaking; Divine Path; Divine View; Semi Divinity; Divinity. After it should be ascension, but it is way too far at the moment, so I haven't thought about it yet. https://discord.gg/mR3pzMN Buy me a coffee: https://ko-fi.com/suiyan
What do you do when you wake up and find yourself inside the very game that you love? What do you do when you realize you that you have not only become an NPC - you have even been thrown back in time to before the game even launched! What will happen when our protagonist's two realities coincide? Han Xiao was a professional power leveler before his transmigration. Using his past life's knowledge, Han Xiao sweeps through the universe as he prepares for the arrival of the players. This is definitely not your typical transmigration novel.
If you're not a fan of fourth wall breaking (which I'm also not a fan of), please try and get past Chapter 5 because that's when the novel truly starts to shine. This note will be removed once I edit out the fourth wall breaking. ---------- Under a planned twist of fate, Aurus was struck by a bolt of lightning, forcing him to realize that he would not be able to play the game he dedicated a lot of his time to ever again. Fortunately, a goddess took pity on his miserable fate, giving him the choice to live out his life as if it was the game he played, plus a few more bonuses on top of that. Does Aurus accept the choice? Of course he does! And with that, Aurus is reincarnated as…a stick? Thankfully, using the bonuses he obtained from the goddess, Aurus eventually evolves into…a bigger stick? Er…witness the adventures of Aurus on his path to becoming stronger! I won't tell you what the future is like because that's no fun! Speaking of which...why did I write about a stick? ---------- Join me on Discord: https://discord.gg/SRaEwGE Official IRAAS Wiki: https://dawnnovels.fandom.com Cover made by jamesmikopi Twitter: https://twitter.com/jamesmikopi Instagram: https://instagram.com/jamesmikopi -------- Due to the author not upholding his promise on the ranks, the author has decided to remove the rank reward system for know to repay the chapter debt that has been accrued. 10 chapter mass release coming eventually.
In the world where Humans and Monster's form a bond and fight together, the world where both Evolve together to get stronger. Walk with Micheal as he starts his adventures with his Silver Sparrow, overcomes countless obstacle and adversaries to fulfill his greatest Dreams. The initial and new chapters getting edited everyday. Release Rate: 14 Ch/Week+ The cover is not mine. I couldn't track down the original creator but if the creator is out there, message me if you want me to take it down or give credit
In a place where Magic reigns supreme, what would our MC do as he finds himself being rejected by the world. This is the story of a boy who is unable to wield mana. After shaming his parents who are considered to be among the strongest Mages of the era. Our MC stands at the terrace of the School building planning to commit suicide. What has fate got stored in for our MC. Will he commit suicide ? If you want to know, join our MC as he struggles. ------------------------------------- All the characters and incidents in this story are imaginary. Please note that the chapter can be a bit slow. So please be a bit patient and read up to 50 chapter before making any opinion .......................... The Cover art is made by Valeriexx. Join the Discord : https://discord.gg/WTDaPfU DM me @ ReincarnatedSaint#2904 on Discord Support me : https://www.paypal.me/ReincarnatedSaint
This is the tale of an earthling, who transmigrated as a dying third-rate god but somehow rose through the ranks, gaining followers and eventually causing the Fourth Great Apocalypse. ☆ "Have you ever heard of the God of Games?" "The God of Games..?" Eleena shook her head in puzzlement. "I have never heard of Him…" "What if the God of Games could give you the power to defeat your enemies?" Xi Wei coaxed patiently. Eleena remained silent for a while, before resolutely lifting her head and fixing her gaze on Xi Wei. "Then I am willing to become a believer of the God of Games!" "Belief isn't something to only be spoken by mouth. Close your eyes and envision His name in your mind, and feel His power with your heart," he said solemnly. "O Master of Games, grant us new life!"
Have you ever wished you exactly knew how to accomplish your dreams? Not feeling the slightest doubt anymore? Being aware at any time how every choice, action and decision of yours affects your future? That's what happened to Jake Wilderth, a procrastinating young man without ambition. When a mysterious silver spaceship, popping out from nowhere, delivered to each Earthling a bracelet containing an AI introducing itself as the Oracle, their destiny changed. From a boring uneventful life Jake began to strive for greatness, treading his Path over the dead bodies of many. What a blessing it would have been if he was the only one profiting of such a gift! But when everyone became equal to face the future, he soon realized no gift comes for free.. Just a warning. Volume 1 sets the atmosphere in a Earth slowly degenerating into chaos and can be considered as a big prologue. It is slow and not as rewarding for the readers than mainstream stories on this website. If you can push through it will be worth it. For some real action you need to wait chap 27. =================================== NB: English is not my native language and despite my best efforts there can be some mistakes. Thanks for your understanding. Discord link: https://discord.gg/d8udP7Q
It is the year 2050 of the Earth Calendar, and while many would think it to be an ordinary year, it is far from what one would expect. With the arrival of Rifts popping up all over the world, portals that came to be known as Ascenders Rifts, a new era is born. Though filled with endless possibilities, the world itself is on a path of destruction. Evan Cross, a warrior from the ruined future, struggles to fight against the inevitable fate of humanity. After failing to save the world two times, he is faced with the same choices yet again, but this time it might just be different. ===More of my works on Webnovel === Digitize - https://www.webnovel.com/book/17048424205270405/Digitize%3A-Rebirth-of-the-Silver-Death-God LevelUp Family - https://www.webnovel.com/book/17397607105687205 ===Release Details=== Daily release - 1 chapter (10:am - 12:am and 7:pm - 12:pm) (GMT-8) Timezone Mass release (Sundays)- Chapters Determined by Main Power Ranking 1 Extra Chapter (Top - 100) 2 Extra Chapter (Top - 50) 3 Extra Chapter (Top - 15) 4 Extra Chapters (Top - 5) Want to show some support? Drop by a Review and a Power Stone. You can also send me a Gift or Paypal Me :) https://www.paypal.me/shadowsfinger - My Discord Server: https://discord.gg/ffVV7cV - Want to read some more of my personal works? Check out below! https://www.patreon.com/ShadowsFinger https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07C7912KX - Follow me on Twitter & Facebook: Twitter -https://twitter.com/ShadowsFinger Facebook - https://www.facebook.com/ShadowsFingers/
"Screw magic, I want to learn how to do cool flips and stuff." Magic is awesome, until you've studied it for centuries. Doevm reincarnates into a human to experience the path of a fighter to its fullest and swears not to rely on magic. There is only one problem, a goddess stands in his way. She pits him against both the hero and the villain for all of eternity. How will he escape this, with magic or his fists? Maybe both? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------(Sorry about the spacing. Webnovel doesn't let me use enter) Winner of contest #110. I upload seven chapters a week. Each chapter has word count around 1500+.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Link to my discord: https://discord.gg/tHaceja ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------While I am an experienced writer, I do make mistakes. Don't be afraid to say you don't understand something or point out an error in grammar. I read all comments. There are naturally some things I won't say. For example, if some says there's an inconsistency and I don't address it, it's probably there for a reason.
A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre
In my opinion, this novel isn’t #1 rank material, but the author is a genius for bribing ppl with extra chapters for power stones. Writing quality is not the worse but still pretty bad, lots of misspelling and wrong words used. Once example, ‘integration’ is frequently used instead of ‘interrogation’. Although this happens quite a lot, the real problem is the way the story is written. The writing style is too shallow, it doesn’t give you the sense that you are immersed in the story world. There are not enough details to describe the character and environment. Up to now I still can’t picture what the characters and the school look like. One reviewer compared this with Lord of the Mysteries, which is just absurd. The writing style of LoM makes you feel like you are inside the MC’s head, immersed in his thoughts, emotions, and actions. This novel feels like you’re reading a summary of the MC’s daily activities, it is detached and doesn’t bring you up close and personal. Story development is progressing nicely so far. Contains your typical tropes and plot armor, but it’s not as absurdly done as other webnovels. Not much else to say since the novel is just beginning. Character design: It’s too early to tell but so far just 2 characters have hints of hidden depth, which could lead somewhere interesting. For now, the characters seem very shallow. The characters need to be fleshed out more, especially regarding their physical descriptions. Vague descriptions like ‘short brown hair and tall figure’ and ‘long blonde hair and perfect proportions’ doesn’t cut it. World background has great potential. Not much is revealed yet, but there are portals to other worlds and different species and factions, which leaves much to be discovered. Overall, I like the novel. There are only 108 chapters released so far, so there is room for improvement. I look forward to seeing how this novel progresses, it definitely has great potential.
✅Logical school life ✅Good vampire progression ✅Interesting npcs ❌Short chapters (Author has other novels to write so its understandable.) ❌Ability system (Author didn't reveal much about it so I won't complain for now.) ❌MC couldn't accept his godsend power (Honestly I think his ignorance about him being a vampire after system told with so many ways is a little forced by the author. Well come on.. He doesn't live in cave and hunt mammoths for living every teenager has some fantasies about vampires theese days but of course he may think drinking blood for living is gross so I won't complain about it too.) Overall it's a good read.
It's a decent read, but I got pulled out of the story a lot by the world, supposed to be a military school but there is zero discipline and pretty much the entire story plays out like "Lord of the Flys" with older kids/stronger kids deciding on the rules and punishments. All this is justified by this apparently making the weak kids want to get stronger so they sell themselves to the military to get resources, which in this world the global military that is fighting an technologically superior race, thinks that's how their going to win by holding power and privilege to a few people instead of you know, what a military actually values like discipline and team work. So anyway I quit at chapter 50, but if your looking for "slowish build vampire Lord of the flies high school". **. It's really not that bad, just fell short in a few too many places for me to continue.
Not sure why this novel is sitting in the number one spot. Compared to the previous ones on that spot I think this one is does not qualify. I was pretty excited when I saw a new Vampire story. but what a big let down. The Plot is terrible. Not even close to the vampire story that I was expecting. I followed the Author's advice on the earlier comments and only read during the weekends so that I can just binge read the chapters made for the entire week plus the bonus ones. But it actually made it worse. I mean reading 10 to 16 chapters are awesome but not if the chapters are only a couple of sentences and there not much content in it. worse part is that some even ends in cliff hangers. Plot needs alot of improvements. Really alot. you might consider opening a forum or something and talk to your readers. some of your ideas are great but you are not using their full potential. characters design in the story is lame bordering ilogical. world building, well if you think that Quinn is a goldfish and he's living in a tiny fishbowl world building. well sure why not. Writing quality is good but not great. should get an editor and just focus on writing content. Only good thing this story have is your update stability.
It's okay I guess? Let's start with characters because thats what I hate the most. As you can imagine when you don't really enjoy the cast it becomes pretty hard to read. The Mc, he is very forgettable. He is a bullied orphan. So you would assume he is fairly mature and strong willed, and at the start it does look that way. But that very quickly falls flat as he gets to military school (we will talk about this later) where he picks up to of the most annoying sidekicks I've seen in a while and he just goes with the flow, he never thinks critically about anything and feels like a pushover. And it doesn't really help with how bipolar he is, he switches mood and tone far too often him to establish a base personality Anyway moving on The ability copy guy, he is noticeable, noticeably annoying, clingy split personality he screams red flags but our Mc just goes with it. Feels like a guy straight out of a bl novel (it's not but the point still stands) Peter i probably remember this guy's name because I had a classmate with the same name and spineless personality, this type of. Character just pisses me off, and he is the best written one which just annoy me even more. This character is well made from a writing standpoint. The girl, she is fairly well put together, we know a bit about what she likes and he general personality, has some strong opinions about ability copy guy. So she feels believable That should be enough rant about characters The story plot/progression So far its pretty good, I have some gripes with how fighting is handled and how some things are made to be bigger problems than they really are and some things are just quietly glossed over all in all fairly good The world The world has some interesting things, but it also makes no sense what so ever, I would rather be in a 18-1900 mental asylum than be at that "military" school this world should have collapsed on itself already. The school mass produces egocentric sociopaths with assembly line efficiency The way this school runs is literally a 101 on how to breed extremists You know how we meme about martial arts novels being unforgiving, they got nothing on this novel. Writing and updates a pretty solid tho Its a decent enough novel, I can overlook the world, but the cast makes it a chore for me to read Best of luck with your novel bud
Decent novel, but the Mc showed his powers way too freely in a military academy...he should have been caught and locked up in a lab to be experimented on by like chapter 40. Also the author uses a lot of incorrect words and that definitely gets annoying. Like bored instead of board and even completely wrong words that sound a bit similar.
The story could have been so good... The only real weak point in the story is MC.... MC is actually brain dead like for real his IQ is so low it's unfathomable how he manages to tie his shoes... Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐ World Background ⭐⭐⭐ 1) It took him like ages to figure out he was a vampire 2) When he finds out it takes him like 2 chapters to tell a random stranger all his secrets. (yea bro i have a system and stuff OOOO and btw i'm also a vampire).... 3) He does so much retarded stuff you think he would have killed himself by now... 4)System tells him if you don't drink blood you will run out of hp in 10h what does MC do? Noting he goes to bed then panics when he wakes up cuz how could he have know his hp would drop ...... 5) Has absolute no awareness of all the clues he leaves like if he would just use a bit of common sense.... 6) The plot is super forced In short this novel is super overrated and i have no clue why its up so high. Brain dead MC ✔ Clueless MC ✔ Below room temperature IQ ✔ No common sense MC ✔ ... So in short sure you can read it but don't waste stones on it.
Everything is great about this book, However the MC is on the extreme end of the spectrum. He got a system that turns him into a vampire, he researches about vampires, he then acts as if the system is just him hallucinating. The MC is sooo stupid your brain cells will kamikaze each other just from reading his thought process and actions. Since this story is in a futuristic setting, I hope MC finds something to cure his extreme brain cell seppuku soon. Of course this is only my review for the first 20ish chapters, if my brain cells survive to the point where MC has the IQ higher than a retarded squirrel I will update. TLDR Character -9999/10