Another Chance in the World of Remnant

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This story was good than you had to put another reincarnator that died just because you wanted to teleport the Mc in the fate series

This seems a lot better than the first one. You ruined that one with the amount of girls you introduced with no good reason.

The MC is a cringe BLM activist/terrorist constantly crying over people being rude to him. Beta male energy. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....

I can’t tolerate the stupid paws, If you wanted the Mc to have claws Tucson (the dude emerald and mercury killed) from season 2 or 3 literally grows claws without the stupid looking paws.

since i trully loved your other ff of rwby that you plan to drop. i will read this. i really liked you made blake an M lol. to bad i couldnt read the chapter where he uses clones to have S with her as she wanted. (the magic clones being NTR is a thing i cannot understand lol)

Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................

Ntr

This novel is definitely one of the better ones. I enjoy our mc’s changes to the plot, and the story is very enticing to read. The characters in the story also stay fairly true to their original counterparts, save for the changes they receive due to the interventions by our mc, but I will say that sometimes characters do not act how they normally would in specific circumstances. For example, the forced romantic relationships of 30-40 year old adults and a supposed 13-14 year old kid (even though said “kid” is 6’8”, battle-scarred and has the mental age of a century-old man). But I can ignore that as it’s not that important and more self-fantasy than anything. Plot progression is good, smooth, and interesting. Character development, aside from romantic relationships (a few are done well), are also good and can be easily imagined coming from the characters. Subplots are easy to follow, and are solved one at a time to allow for readers to process things better. The world seems to be branching slowly but surely from canon, though it’s not a jarring change as many other novels get subjected to. Overall, very good read and continuing to look forward to more.

This is absolutely good. MC isn't strong from the start but geting stronger and stronger. He didn't jump at every female but slowly interacting with them. all is good for me

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Great fic, loved the rwby part but this fate part is just a bunch of nonsense full of plot holes, who was the random isekai character and how did he show up in remnant (not to mention the nonsense of a system power to transport a person to whole another universe), why include fate storyline without finishing rwby storyline? I am just waiting for this fate part to end and him to go back to remnant now.

É uma boa fanfic de RWBY e bastante consistente na sua historia, o autor não é muito bom em drama e as vezes faz as cenas parecerem mais uma novela mexicana ou um dialogo de bom humor com um toque de seriedade, claro essas cenas são poucas e as vezes ele acerta porem no geral é uma fanfic bem consistente, dou meus parabéns ao autor e espero que ele melhore sua escrita com minha critica.

romance?

Como me gustó el. Inicio, pero el prota es otro prota/autor xianxia qué mata o daña a otros solo porque le conviene o tiene el temperamento del imbécil típico de los adolescentes piojos, lo doy 3 estrellas, por ser una buena historia y escritura pero un protagonista/autor self insert desagradable ODIO cuando los protagonistas se hacen pasar por sabios o superiores morales solo porque conocen el futuro, Cuando todo sale a pedir de boca, simplemente es demasiado estúpido y la historia se vuelve unilateral y aburrida El prota olvida que Salem tiene magia Es difícil encontrar un autor que no tenga una forma de pensamiento desagradable que lo plasme e n su self insert Es simple, si no puedes soportar que la forma de pensar que utilizas se aplique hacia tus acciones y decisiones entonces eres un hipócrita de mierda que merece el peor de los sufrimientos e indigno de la vida

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Interesting story. Great start, great writing quality (definitely not translated). Lost interest and Dropped at around chapter 140-ish. At age 13, he already can beat Salem or at least fight at equal strength, and he still want to attend Beacon... That's not the main problem for me. It's the fact he used wish-knowledge artifact that can stop-time and training in there without any problem. He's still 13-14, and already can defeat final boss. Maybe he's gonna use that artifact again next time and instantly got the power to beat the Light/Dark Gods.

it's great just started reading it recently and Binge read the 270 current chapters in a week or two

it's really a great read and I am really enjoying every moment of it. I hope you keep up your good work and maybe go to other worlds.Many thanks for you hard work!