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2024-09-21 01:09

Como me gustó el. Inicio, pero el prota es otro prota/autor xianxia qué mata o daña a otros solo porque le conviene o tiene el temperamento del imbécil típico de los adolescentes piojos, lo doy 3 estrellas, por ser una buena historia y escritura pero un protagonista/autor self insert desagradable ODIO cuando los protagonistas se hacen pasar por sabios o superiores morales solo porque conocen el futuro, Cuando todo sale a pedir de boca, simplemente es demasiado estúpido y la historia se vuelve unilateral y aburrida El prota olvida que Salem tiene magia Es difícil encontrar un autor que no tenga una forma de pensamiento desagradable que lo plasme e n su self insert Es simple, si no puedes soportar que la forma de pensar que utilizas se aplique hacia tus acciones y decisiones entonces eres un hipócrita de mierda que merece el peor de los sufrimientos e indigno de la vida

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