honestly the book is good not great just good there's a few points to be made while reading this for one the plot is to slow it only move forward every ten chapters even then it still feels like the mc hasn't really did anything. second Im not a fan of yuri stuff the mc barely started his harem and and his first girl is already going to someone else for relief after just having done the deed that that's basically cheating and I refuse to be told differently and if it's going to be the same for every other girl that joins the harem then what's the point of reading this but I digress back on topic if the story can speed up alot more I don't need to know what they do day by day hour by hour minute by minute it becomes tedious to read welp there my point
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LIKEWell, everybody should check that ch first and see. Personally I don't like it and I would have dropped the FF right away but since I don't have personal opinion on the story yet so I wasn't affected that much,since the way reavn used the girl to clean herself is more like using a servent or something like that. If it was more then that ot anything close I wouldn't have wasted a single sec and removed this from my library . But if something like This happens more I will definitely drop it
I wouldn't really say that what she did was any worse than him having a harem in the first place. If anything Raven just used the girl to clean herself, not to mention that she was literally thinking about that same girl relieving Sylva, the mc, the whole time she was being cleaned. She had no intention of starting anything with the other girl and if she did then she simply wished for her to be a part of Sylva's harem.