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Hp: The Outcast

Author: confused4you
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What is Hp: The Outcast

Read Hp: The Outcast fanfiction written by the author confused4you on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Movies fanfic stories, covering action, romance, adventure, magic, harem. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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It is a reboot of my old ff Hp: The secret heir. I am trying to remove many problems that I cause in that ff. I need to clarify this before any of you read. I don't write that well, so please try to be helpful and not lash out saying bad grammar. English is not my first language. You find something wrong, comment it and I will try to fix it.

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Lea, born as a girl of strength and boldness. Daughter of a man called Landi who is among the poor citizens of the poor country, Maneth. Lea, being a very hardworking girl would do anything in her power to provide the little she can to meet she and her father's needs. BUT... A time came where the girls of the Age range:- 17-23, started missing. This caused a great panic to arise in Maneth. Lea and her father was not aware of this, and with this, Lea, who would go out very early in the morning and come back late in the night, went out at night to find something that she and her father would eat. But in the process of searching, she got kidnapped. Lea, in tears, followed the men to the far lands, known as Barenui. She is held captive for days and weeks. On the day that they finally had the opportunity to see the sun, Lea came across a man dressed in a Royal Robe. Of course, all ladies will be careful with newly met strangers. She tried her best to not get carried away by his looks, and prevailed a little, but not in full. She missed her step and wanted to tumble on the floor, but instead fell on something light and soft. Lea fell on him, but with the strength in his veins, he maintained stability. She thanked him and quickly left. When finally the news of the Prince Of Barenui was looking for a wife and that was the reason for the kidnapping of girls from farther lands, the girls from Maneth shed hot tears because if they get picked, they may not get to see their parents ever again. The day finally came and the lady was selected. Lea, was surprised when she saw that the Prince of Barenui... Was the man she came across with some days back...

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :Year 1
Volume 2 :Year 2
Volume 3 :Year 2 Christmas Arc
Volume 4 :Summer is here!
Volume 5 :Year 3

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Phanton
PhantonLv2Phanton

Look its kinda slow because of the distribution of content on the chapters but is also much better than the flash like speed that the first had. the thing of the change of the baseline reality (Canon) of the original was a nice touch just... in the first the relationship of the MC with Harry's sister was too much forced atleast in the first 20 chp of the original where i just stoped so dont know much about that but just make characters that have a bit of realism and dont mess up the blank characters that we have. the first was so bad at character design that i lost interest in 20 min. anyway you could expand the world more than the original harry potter it will be good. if you do that make things simple and "human" like basecally everything that made my experience less than desirable was better atleast for now all i see on this new version is a Harry potter fic with great potential and a autor with more vision and experience than the Last? Time so keep the good work i have great hope on this you so keep the good work[img=recommend]

leojesus120
leojesus120Lv2leojesus120

I'm a fan from your previous work (The Secret Heir) so i'm looking foward to see the changes. A mysterious first chapter, hope we can have a long story ahead

JSirMixalotL
JSirMixalotLLv4JSirMixalotL

It started pretty good but when he started his music it got way too much focus and the story seemed to stagnate. It got too boring for me personally but maybe other people like 3 chapters with 80% song lyrics in it. If you ignore the music part it is a decent story with little flaws that can easily be improved upon

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

it was even acceptable, but it went to the bottom the moment he had his first interaction with Victoria Potter, with the story getting boring and weird... it's just confusing and boring

coolbro2002
coolbro2002Lv3coolbro2002

nice fjjfifjfiriririr8jtjfitit8rhjrjrk o.o 3738u rd 7fufuhfucurifuufufuf

Asura_Of_Gluttony
Asura_Of_GluttonyLv14Asura_Of_Gluttony

Nice

The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

night_king01010
night_king01010Lv4night_king01010

are u still updating this novel???______

nigemcplebagen
nigemcplebagenLv14nigemcplebagen

Lets keep this simple. Fun read. Good story. Me likey.

septimus_son
septimus_sonLv4septimus_son

The Story is good, the writing is fabulous, but Cotton 🐍 is just perfect

Word7
Word7Lv3Word7

Can someone spoil me what exactly happened with Jon's mother and Tom Riddle? I don't care so just go ahead and spoil that secret. I will continue to read though.

Jackleell
JackleellLv1Jackleell

More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2Alef_Biersack

The story in general is not bad it's good the part that I liked the most was his lineage without a doubt, but the MC is very shallow in terms of character development, his first attempt at a conversation with strong emotions was quite forced but it improves over the course of the game story, one of the biggest flaws is the MC trying not to change anything, an example is he could have taken Tom Riddle's diary but he didn't, the MC seems to lack strong emotions and is kind of robotic but improves a little over the course of the story story, the character doesn't seem to have a backstory before he is reincarnated which I understand gets weird a 24 year old guy attracted to 14 year old girls, which can be fixed by having the MC die pretty early at the age of 13-15 years since it wouldn't make much difference but it's still a good story that you can spend time reading.

Pepsterpup
PepsterpupLv3Pepsterpup

Amazing I can’t wait for more chaps 🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼🤞🏼 so goood.

vicky111mudi
vicky111mudiLv5vicky111mudi

Nice novel and it seems to be well thought. I hope it last longer than others. Nice novel and it seems to be well thought. I hope it last longer than others.

Goran_Manev
Goran_ManevLv3Goran_Manev

this is too cringe for me [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

victor_dupretz
victor_dupretzLv1victor_dupretz

More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

DaoistSLaNLA
DaoistSLaNLALv1DaoistSLaNLA

Please continue the FF. Please continue the FF. Please continue the FF. Please continue the FF. Please continue the FF. Please continue the FF.

DaoistOAWSz1
DaoistOAWSz1Lv1DaoistOAWSz1

I like this FF please continue and please if possible update on the regular...................................................................

immaheadout1
immaheadout1Lv1immaheadout1

I am coming from the previous hp fic and I have to say this one is significantly better specially the fight scenes. It seems like you have stopped using then every 5 seconds. Jokes aside fantastic work author

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