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what chapter does he and his mom do the act?
*I put 3 stars when I haven't read past chapter 1* Can someone explain what exactly happened?
It's alright but the beginning is cringe 😬
Is there even smut situations with the aunt???
Pretty good. Can ya spoil me the love interest? Has she appeared yet? Hopefully it ain't the elf girl that betrayed him.
Songs are definitely a big part of it mate. I've read some books that also had original songs but they werent cringe and were executed/beautifully written. This one though... well it wasnt anything noteworthy and felt super bland. But I do agree everything else is fine.
Is the mom dead or is she just so ethereal else for now? I didn't really get the chapter.
so they're married at the beginning?
Reading it feels so slow. The plot doesn't seem like it's going anywhere and if it is it's at a snails pace.