Carlos_Balbizan

correcting: harem, please

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s2 man...

do you have any iq? honestly man... just read it. If that's what you think, I'm not going to make an effort to change the opinion of someone irrelevant to my life on the other side of the planet

I don't know if you understood... but it was a sarcastic comment. like, just reread

It would be a good story if there really was a sense of protagonism. Splitting the POVs by centering other people's point of view to take up more than 80% of the story is disastrous... No need for other people's POVs when this can be solved simply with third person POV, the author seems to want merge the concept of a novel with something like a book or movie, where there is not really a centralization of the characters in most cases. At least that's the point of view of someone who wouldn't even be able to identify the protagonist if the first 3 chapters are removed...