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Naruto : The Demon Swordsman

Author: Charizard6
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Arthur was a soldier and well he died and got reincarnated in the world of Naruto and got the classic 3 power ups from ROB . - Isshiki's Dojutsu , Demon slayer breathing techniques and 2 cool weapons. Read the story to find more about it MC is born before Hashirama dies. He is of the same age group as Danzo and Hiruzen. . . . . Author notes: MC will be strong but not so overpowered that he can fight armies alone or kill kages like cabbages . It will take time for him to get that strong. There will be no harem .Maybe romance but that will be a little late in story. Nothing is owned by me except my OCs . Everything belongs to Naruto franchise and demon slayer franchise If you can please support me on pat*reon. Link> http://pat*reon.com/Charizard6 No star in the link

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800 Chs
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*Let it be known that this review is based on 4 wasted chapters on the Prologue itself and one other review that explained the core issues with this fic, which i myself agree with completely.**I'm not an experienced reviewer,so don't expect bullet points or specifics.**I also want to note that this isn't meant to be harsh criticism. Just thoughts on what i hoped would have been, had it been presented in a different manner.*I came in thinking that i was gonna read about a reincarnator who was just gonna get thrown into the narutoverse with demon slayer breathing techniques/skills/moves, as well as have what any great demon slayer/swordsman needs, which is a sword, be it notable ones from Enma From One Piece,Tessaiga From Inuyasha, Ea From Fate Series, Venuzdonoa From The Misfit,Murasame From Akame Ga Kill, Ryujin Jakka From Bleach..etc.. so many choices with minor restrictions because of the power the blades themselves wield to which the mc could have trained to overcome/ unlock /obtained at certain points in the story. I thought, "Narutoverse, Demon slayer, iconic sword, let the road to becoming the greatest Swordsman this world has ever seen begin," he gets into the world an bam, that's it. But no, this ended being the biggest wish fulfillment I've read so far, with an mc whose mentality is questionable for his age (which is 45yrs old)and past occupation as a former Spec Ops Soldier. The wishes in this story are questionable as well. The supposed "GOD" is more of a ROB, but I'm not gonna get into that. This is already far too long for a comment. This is my first time writing something this long, i guess it's cause these prologues have left much to be desired for something that could've been better executed. It's been said that first impressions are the most important,but so far, I'm not impressed. Good luck to the author, and I hope you don't take this as me bashing your work👍

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