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2023-05-23 01:07

I quite like this fanfiction. However, I think the author is making the Uzumaki Clan a bit overpowered, six people who can seal Tailed Beasts seems too much. He would have a tough time making other villages relevant if he went on like this. Even Konoha had a handful of S-rank shinobi in most of the wars and, to me, it makes no sense for Uzu to have 10. Still, I find it better than the other Uzumaki fanfictions out there, at least the MC is not overpowered since birth.

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Charizard6
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Thanks for the review. I will explain a few things though In my personal opinion 6 people who can seal tail beast in the Uzumaki clan are not much tbh. I mean even people from waterfall village could seal a tail beast. Now as for why they have 10 S rank shinobi well because the warring states period ended just 10 years ago, strong survived weak died in that era. And I am not just making Uzumaki village strong other villages will have somewhat similar strength. Not 10 S rank shinobi but 6-7 atleast. As for why I think they have so many s rank Shinobi is because they could find 3 great villages. Secondly in konoha if we count the second ninja war they would have 10 S rank Shinobi Orochimaru , Jiraiya, Tsunade,Sakumo hatake, danzo , Hiruzen , uchiha clan patriarch, hyuga clan patriarch, Kagami, Homura,Koharu and God knows if there were any other elders in uchiha clan or hyuga or even other clan heads. I hope you understand my point. Please keep supporting my story. thankyou

SuryaputraKarna
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he is op since birth. And for bo reason everyone believes anything a 3 year says without and dought

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