axender_133

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brother seriously you really wrote the whole thing 🤣 It reminded me of the haikyu Manga. thank you

at this point I'm thinking Granger will become the boss of all street Pokemon comunity.

bribing marshadow 😂 you can't expect anything less from Granger

***REVIEW HERE*** I really like your book and idea but your story feels like a summary to me, like only MC is describing who is who and what is going on through him. I would like to see if you use a detailed plot, location, and interaction with others to a 3rd POV so we could feel others reaction towards you and there's thought at times. Even if it's a fast paced story. sorry if my writing feels aggressive, I really like your story, I only think it will feel better if you have those things in this story.

if you want to read a blue lock fanfic then it's for you but if you are here for haikyu fanfic then it's not for you No character development or some ego