Honkai Impact: Invictus.

With the lacking of amount of Honkai Impact fanfics on this website, especially good ones like the HI3: The Rise Herrscher of Shadow fanfic, this fanfic is definitely a godsend. (My standards aren't that high so you shouldn't exactly 100% trust this half-baked review) Writing Quality (5/5) - There's little to no grammar mistakes and the sentences are coherent. Plus another reviewer (DaoistrjOXfa) who uses a translator for this fanfic apparently had a relatively easy time understanding too. Update Consistency (5/5) - This fanfic based on the upload date is six days old and already has 20 chapters with a daily basis of around 1-2 chapters once Volume 2 started which is exceptional to say the least. Story/Plot (4.5/5) - The MC dies and then is sent to God where that God gives him one wish and spins a roulette that lands on the Honkai world, deciding the world he'll be going to, typical stuff so far. But the timeline he gets transported is not the current era but the Fire Moth era where characters like Eden and Elysia are genuinely alive which is unique and opens a lot of possibilities. The MC has no previous knowledge of the Honkai world and is going in blind with the only hint that the world isn't so hardcore where you literally die the second your born although still pretty dangerous. The pacing also has been going at a pace that's neither fast or slow and is keeping a steady flow. Characters (4.5/5) - Wolfgang Schneider and now known as Einheri, the MC was an 'average' doctor who cared for only doing the minimal for the most part. After being reincarnated, he's shown to be a charming person who has a outgoing personality that can easily make friends with a likeable attitude. He's also open to the idea of a harem so a instant plus for my personal preference. I don't think I should reveal the cast of characters that's part of the MC's little friend group but all you need to know is that they're likeable and will mostly likely not annoy you, all having a personality of their own. Also the harem (Well the MC only has one partner so far but it'll clearly grow, especially during the current era when it comes to that based on the author's reply to me) is not Pokemon-like but the development with the first partner seem slightly rushed imo. The development really only lasts a few chapters as its sadly skimmed over with a two year time skip in-between with off-screen development. In the end I don't really mind that much since the author is new to writing romance and most likely just wanted to progress the plot since it was starting to feel like a slice-of-life fanfic at that point but I just hope that not every romantic development will be skimmed over like that since seeing some fluffy moments with progress is nice. World Background (?/5) - Pretty early to score this so I'm leaving this on unknown but based on the 20 chapters so far, the main cast have only just moved out of their main meeting point which is the city of Nagazora so not much of the world has been explored so its definitely unfair to rate this.

Well... So far its an amazing read but as of chapter 58. Im dropping this. Whats the point on following the game script completely? You just recreated or made up the events on the previous era completely according to the game. Also you author said you will make the characters happy in the snyposis since mihoyo did them dirty. But you still followed the same path as the game, leading to the charactees suffering anyways. Why bother reading this then? Just play the game. I was eager to know if you were going to save himeko and the others or not but i got completepy dissapointed. You still killed her. You introduced your reincarnator into the game story... and you changed NOTHING. Except that it was mc doing the main events. If i had to say something aboit this would be its similar to a good sweet drink that turns extremely sour and bitter midway.

cuck/braindead mc & ntr alert, proceed with extreme caution. might be a bit biased, but i will never defend any kind of novel with such content.

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The script format is not doing it for me. You are going great the first time with only one perspective, but now its just a huge mess. The story and everything else is ok, but the way it's formatted is just painful

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A pretty good story in my opinion. You can tell the personality of the characters and they don't feel flat (like in most fan-fic's). The writing quality is good (I read with translator and I don't see as many translation errors as a common fan fic, so I don't feel I can give a full review to the writing quality, sorry). The development of the story, goes at a good pace, although there is a bit of time jumps, and sometimes it feels a bit accelerated (due to the time jumps, although it is not felt in the last chapters), you still manage to feel that the plot or the pace does not feel forced, it's a bit difficult to explain but I'll leave it at that: A bit rushed, but very enjoyable. Character design, well as I said before, yes, I feel the characters, they don't feel forced or stiff, they feel alive and the interactions between them don't feel unnatural, their interactions in general are natural. And on the subject of the world, well, in this area if feels like exploring the world, but it's still starting and can't give a full opinion to this area. (Opinion based up to the current chapter: chapter 19) [DeepL Translator]

Something about this fic made me dislike it, but i can't say for sure why, so i'm giving it a 1 star review for the moment

Thank you, her story was the reason I played Honkai once more, and it brightened my day when COVID struck. Through the interaction between the author and writer, I was able to overcome my loneliness in isolation. Her story and the protagonist's actions motivated me to finish my thesis. Only now have I realized that the 'Never Give Up' trait that the protagonist has for 'Honkai Corruption', 'Erosion', and 'Oripaty' is picturing the author's way of fighting her illness.

Amazing story, character not ooc, not mindless heroine.TBH no idea why so low view count, other novel only 50ish chap with low words count yes getting 2 million viewhere almost 300chap woth high word count yet only 3mil same with other novel they are amazing

I really loved this fanfic. It's not like those other fanfics where a guy gets reincarnated/transported to a fictional world but the plot either becomes it's own story and forgets that it is supposed to be a fanfic or the plot barely changes at all. It has a good balance of still following the plot but the OC actually being acknowledge as an addition to that world and some this change because of it. I really recommend it even if you don't know a lot about honkai impact 3rd and you don't care about spoilers and stuff. There were a few hiccups but the main story got better as the plot goes on...

This is the best Honkai Fanfic so far. Good story line , good flow, good character development, progression. I am voting power stones. Hope author keep writing and don't quit any time soon.

it feels like reading a more powerful and Chad Johnny Cage and i love it.

Thank You for everything. Hope you have pleasant Journey.

I have no knowledge about honkai impact nor Genshin impact so this feels like an original novel to me which I find it hard to read now, but this story manages to hook me for hundreds of chapters, I definitely recommend this to all even if they don't have any knowledge about the honkai verse, another advantage of this fanfic is that the romance does not make you feel cringed it's just smooth and good

Nothing More To Say, Just Read This Masterpiece! Smart MC, Beautifull Story, Lot of Fluffy, Funny Interaction, Nice Action, Interesting Development and Amusing Side Story

Please author-sama don't end such great story................................... . ...........................................................

This is a good fanfic, I'm looking forward to the development of the story, and I hope the storyline will be more interesting in the future............ ........................I look forward to the continuation

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i have not played the game, so this story is like an original to me not like a fanfic, at first its seemed childish, cliched and some of the characters at the start were a bit 2D and monotonous but as the novel progressed it improved so much and story also became better. so 5 stars from me