A pretty good story in my opinion. You can tell the personality of the characters and they don't feel flat (like in most fan-fic's). The writing quality is good (I read with translator and I don't see as many translation errors as a common fan fic, so I don't feel I can give a full review to the writing quality, sorry). The development of the story, goes at a good pace, although there is a bit of time jumps, and sometimes it feels a bit accelerated (due to the time jumps, although it is not felt in the last chapters), you still manage to feel that the plot or the pace does not feel forced, it's a bit difficult to explain but I'll leave it at that: A bit rushed, but very enjoyable. Character design, well as I said before, yes, I feel the characters, they don't feel forced or stiff, they feel alive and the interactions between them don't feel unnatural, their interactions in general are natural. And on the subject of the world, well, in this area if feels like exploring the world, but it's still starting and can't give a full opinion to this area. (Opinion based up to the current chapter: chapter 19) [DeepL Translator]
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