Binged it in a couple hours waiting for something to happen, and when something was about to happen.. surprise paywall. Listen, you might be doing this as a job and that's great, but from the reader POV it's a pos move.

betacuck POV

Very annoying reading experience thanks to the childishly petty mc, the girls instantly falling in love with him just by meeting him and the overall disrespect shown by the mc, oh and the novel needs some proof-reading. The dna system is broken but it's also really interesting.

gave it a second and last chance and was really enjoying it, especially the soul being and how you could feel the aura of uncertainty during the beginning of the island arc, but at some point the idiocy of doubling down on the same dumbass joke that you already know your readers don't like became unbearable, at this point it's pretty much confirmed that it's a provocation to the people who don't like it, if you're so tough then stop bitching about people "misunderstanding" and take the criticism like a man.

Man what a disappointment, i gave this author a second chance after the "cursed gamer" disaster but looks like it was a bad idea. The most annoying thing about this novel isn't the zoomer/reddit wording, the long walls of text saying nothing or the character mashup, it's the mc. Listen, you can't write a Li Qiye on steroids kind of character and then keep him as a weak ant, it just doesn't work. You've been jerking him off since chapter 1, hyping him up as if he was the alpha and the omega, but instead of that we got a kid who likes acting though but at the time of action gets either blueballed or saved by a third party, wherever he goes he has to keep his head down like a beta to not provoke stronger people.. are you telling me that a being of this level wouldn't feel in constant danger because of how weak he is in his current vessel? that he wouldn't focus on getting strong before starting to flirt with girls? i've read 70+ chapters and his feats so far are killing a furry, an old man, some grunts and a rat! if you told me this mc was actually the "canon" Aqua with a system i would've believed you.

you had me hooked and completely intrigued until chapter 19.. listen, at this point we barely know anything about the main character, there's a hunter coming to kill him and he's getting stronger, but your decision is to introduce a mary sue and have her toying the mc around, killing any hype and tension built up! if she didn't tell us from the get-go about wanting to be friends with him we would've been worried about how his first supernatural fight would go, and then would be surprised by how he got a strong ally, but no, it was just an ability showcase/exhibition. wish there was an option to leave a review without score, find it kinda unfair to rate a novel based on 19 chapters, guess i'll leave a 5* to not ruin the rating with such a low quality review.

As a kid-mc hater i honestly didn't expect this novel to be good but have to admit the writing is very entertaining, specially considering how the mc has no goal (crafting a body was a temporary one) and just exists to be annoying, gave me some Xu Que from The Ultimate Scheming System vibes (Xu Que is annoying because of the system, i know) But sadly i'm dropping it because i'm not into yuri, yeah it may be a just harmless joke (a suspiciously recurrent one) but i'm not taking any chances. Also sorry but i can't respect the choice of "trading" his eyesight to create a body for someone who's not even from his family, i'm sure he will recover it later but lets pretend he doesn't, no matter how you put it, he's blind and will remain blind until his last days, meanwhile the god will be enjoying life.

don't know much about this game, still, i had nothing to read at the moment so i gave it a chance and man, where's the progress? 40 chapters in and the dude is still a visionless ant, he found out at lvl 10 that leveling can evolve his entire being yet he decided to use the system to level up skills instead, sure he will probably get xp thanks to these skills but meh, not waiting 40+ chapters to find out if he gets slightly stronger after evolving (probably will be traveling to a harder city as soon as he evolves just to become an ant again) also, isn't this game a gacha grindfest? why isn't he using his skills to clear those mob camps in the open, or to get nearby chests for xp and loot? weird.

everything was going relatively well but, out of nowhere, the big brain mc decides to mindcontrol one of his enemies (a maid working as a spy who poisoned the previous body owner) into r@ping a young master who lusted after her as revenge.. i don't know man, if that's what gets you going then enjoy, as for me? i'm leaving before more red flags are raised.

This novel is such a bait, you might think after reading the first chapters that the mc would reincarnate into alternate timeline Goku's body after alternate Zamasu takes over, right? well too bad, he instead reincarnates as baby kakarot, which is basically Goku, and then decides to open a nursery

Listen, i really wanted to like it because i have nothing else to read but i just can't endure how emo the mc is, i mean yeah he had a tough life before reincarnating but come on, the moment the mc is angry or insecure he will let everyone in his proximity know about it and explain the reasons without missing a detail. Also the system (?) or whatever that was, not a fan.

the problem with this novel is that it has no main character, well, at least that's what it feels like when you're 100+ chapters deep, you can't get attached to anything because there are timeskips every 2 or 3 chapters, in fact the novel itself is: 40% timeskips, 10% light faceslapping, 40% people's reactions to games/movies/products, 10% mc stuff.

From the start i'm clarifying that i'm a child-mc hater, so there you go. Getting that out the way, what can i say about the novel? it's kinda unbearable, there's a lot of talking and little being said, i'm still trying to figure out why was the starting naruto arc a thing, it could've been pretty much any other shounen verse and it would still be the same, also, the ability-sealing cliche after throwing him into another world was really funny, i'm still laughing, great development! But hey at least the waifu selection was good, oh and no offense but Yuki has to be the least threatening/awe-inspiring name an Uchiha can get, guess it was intended because of the child mc thingy but eh.

try not to fall asleep challenge: level impossible sometimes i try to convince myself thinking: "hey, maybe this novel just isn't for me, i might not be the target reader" but at some point it gets old.

I had literally nothing else to read so i've mentally prepared myself to endure an "idol" novel, only to end up with a cheap revenge/slice of life novel. Liked the thug mc and was somewhat getting into the performance aspects but the revenge subplot killed my interest.

low iq mc, also there's usage of aphrodisiacs and all those unpleasant things present on most low quality novels. .................. ................... ....................

Yeah that's enough stupidity for me, i kept telling myself it would get better, to ignore the mc's incel-like behaviour, to not think about what will the novel become once the vrmmo tag goes out the window, but as chapters pass the mc keeps getting progressively dumber, and as of chapter 256 i simply cannot believe what i'm reading, the fact that this "plot" just happened blows my mind, if this dude is so clueless with his past life memories then i cannot imagine how idiotic he used to be, no wonder he was enslaved! looks like he's only smart when it comes to trashtalking girls.

Gave it a try because of the chapter-to-rating ratio, everything appeared to be fine until the red flags started popping out.. young masters? check, mistreated female characters? check, mafia/organizations? check, r*pe threat scene? check, i wouldn't be surprised if there were some irl assassination/kidnap attempts as well! disappointing, imagine focusing on the vrmmo aspect, you know, the reason why people clicked on the novel, instead of showcasing some generic young master type of characters behaving like subhumans just because you wanted to build some fake sense of urgency.

Garbage, the system is worthless and the clown mc does nothing with his knowledge of the game, just gets pushed around by literally everyone. Must read if you want to get mad.

Well it was good while it lasted, but the drama and the constant bitching ended up grinding my patience into dust, also it's time to start considering DxD a curse, everytime it's introduced in a fanfic the quality takes a nosedive.. The first 40 chapters are great, i didn't even miss a comma, but by chapter 80 i was so annoyed i started skimming through.