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Blind System

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อ่านนิยาย Blind System โดย ผู้เขียน Tunmise_Phenex ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.A new vr game just came out with a 1000% reality, and Tang Zhan was part of the people who played the game.Although it was said that those with disabilities won't be disabled in the game, but he was s...

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A new vr game just came out with a 1000% reality, and Tang Zhan was part of the people who played the game. Although it was said that those with disabilities won't be disabled in the game, but he was still blind, and by pure luck he encountered something that would change his life. He was the first person to awaken the system, he awakened it a week before others, and he is in the process of learning more about the system before everyone else. How would he fare in the apocalypse when zombies and humans alike are against him.

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Seven Mafias Reunite

Main Characters: Daniela Amelia Elizabeth Rocci Rodriguez Emilaino Nathaniel Aries Talon Devil Grey (Knight King- given by warrior) Daniel Jose Stefano Santiago Delon Melina Close to Main Characters: (their kids) Storm Warrior(Nathaniel) Max Lucifer(Nathaniel) Jax Renato(Daniel) Austin Christopher(Issac Wolf) Secondary Characters: Dimitri Knight King Sullivan Blaze Austin Ryan Santiago Delon Melina Juan Ryder Melina Cristiano Jennifer Luna Santiago Delon Melina Blade Xavier Rocci Rodriguez Emiliano Carmen Melanie Rocci Rodriguez Russo Emiliano Logan Rei Rocci Rodriguez Emiliano Justin Manuel Rocci Rodriguez Emiliano Phoniex Rage Rocci Rodriguez Russo Emiliano Daniela is in love with two men named Nathaniel and Daniel. She was pregnant at a young age. While being a mom of 4 children her world was ripped apart when the love of her life left. She never found out why. She turns into a player to stop the pain and more drama awaits as when Daniel does know not he is a dad and her pasts come back to haunt her. But, did her past EVER leave? Daniela is an assassin known as " The Panther." In the rankings of being number 1 or 2 Daniela is #2 because her daughter Storm is better and went up in the rankings to be in 1st place with other assains. Her family is full of assains, killers, leaders, dealers, fighters, hackers, snipers, bomb experts, knife experts, gun expersts/makes guns, lawyers, law enforcement officers and manymore. Daniela and her family are aganist human trafficking, drug dealing when it comes to underage kids under the age of 18. She HATES arranged marriages. This story is taken from different perspectives. Read to find out more. Edit: Everyone has a story. Their stories will go into this one no separate books but it will still depend on who they are.

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K! Sweet Deceptions...

Powerful and ruthless, mysterious at the same time influential, he brings down every company that tries to cross the line with him. The Wei technology CEO has crossed his path this time and he wouldn't let them off. They had to do something. They sent the heir to replace his newly appointed psychologist and the only girl in the deadly RYS group to apply as a secretary. ..... What??? I am pregnant? Yes Ma'am, you are. Congratulations! . I can't keep this child No, You'll keep the child. This will become our greatest weapon against him. . . Mummy, why do we have to move from here again? We should just face whatever it is head on! The cute little boy said to his mummy What? Head on? with Ji Fei? I must be mad to do that! He'll eat us alive. He's the deadliest person on this planet. We need to leave! Get your sister Mum! Who exactly is this Ji Fei? I am! A cold voice sounded behind them. They all looked back to see a man in windbreaker. The Asura is here! Handsome uncle! What are you doing here? Didn't we promise to meet up tomorrow? Little Dumpling exclaimed Mr. Juice maker, what are you doing here? Do you know mummy? Little Fresh Meat was also surprised. What Handsome uncle? what Mr. Juice maker? We're done for! Long time no see Li Nuan.... He said with an evil smirk. I still owe you one more cute little cherry. I'm here to repay my loan Li Nuan: "..." PS - All Characters and Organizations used in this book is totally fictitious.

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จำนวน 0 :Auxiliary Volume
จำนวน 1 :Acquiring the Blind system.
จำนวน 2 :New Beginnings.

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TheStarFarAway
TheStarFarAwayLv1TheStarFarAway

I like your idea, although it's misdirected in many ways. Admittedly, I'm a novice writer too, but I can give you some advice. Please note that I have only read two chapters for now. First, regarding wording. It is advisable to keep track of how many times the same word has been used in a paragraph, even if it is short. Short words may be repeated twice, while medium and long words should be avoided after one use. Now for thoughts on describing the environment and characters. At the point of the second chapter, you have fairly simple characters. They don't have the kind of things that would grab the reader's attention. I recommend reading articles about so-called character cards and making them somewhere or just mentally putting together a pattern of the character in your head. For example, white pupils can't exist in the real world, so it should have been described why he has those pupils. Maybe they are not white, but just faded due to blindness. The story seems to develop in a linear fashion. I like that you described the main character's family. It's an important part of him as a character. However, it's not quite clear why he decided to explore Qi for so many years and why he kept calling the butler (?) to read him the contents of the scroll. Another problem is the character design. The main character's image as an appearance is a bit cliched, although this can be justified by the fact that you are a beginner, but you should learn more about Chinese names, as the name Heewon cannot exist in Chinese in any case. This is as an example. If I'm not mistaken, there was also one more incorrect name. World Background. It's generally vague here so far, but I think for a novel that starts with the protagonist being immersed in another world, it's not that important. You''ve described the basic aspects, and that's a good thing. All in all, you come out with a strong 3. I'll keep reading.

Styx_Joe
Styx_JoeLv1Styx_Joe

This story is coming up well if only the author can post more chapters. The characters should have a better description and the skills although explained well there are some that aren't clear. So thanks for the story.

Quinn_Talen_1536
Quinn_Talen_1536Lv1Quinn_Talen_1536

This story is good, and great and i like how it is coming up. So u have decided I'll continue reading it and even add it to my library, because it is a good read.

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