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Victorious Fighter!

Author: Try_hard
Anime & Comics
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What is Victorious Fighter!

Read Victorious Fighter! fanfiction written by the author Try_hard on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, romance, adventure, system, harem. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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What if you wake up with new set of memories? What if you learn that your family supposed to be from fictional story with you not existing? What is you gain a system that allows you create a quest and give you reward? Haruto Yuki find himself in this exact same scenario. Series: To Love Ru, Kengan Ashura, Baki, History Strongest disciple Kenichi, Etc. This story has mix world and the power scale is according to me. if you have complain then read the original. I will try to make him Strong but not too Op.

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Universe 89 It's a universe under the system or heaven called [Library]. There are creatures living in the "heaven" created by the [Library] and they are called authors. They write stories and the [Library] will create a planet that will follow that book's storyline. Meaning there is a Protagonist in every world. The reincarnating rules of the souls inside the system is this: The miserable ones will be lucky and the lucky ones will be miserable. Meaning, if you're lucky or happy in your past life, you'll be miserable in your next life. And if you're miserable in your past life, you'll be lucky or happy in your next life. It's obvious that souls who were a main character in their past life will definitely become miserable in their next life. Why? Because the lady luck has always been on their side. But what will happen to a main character that has a tragic story? Would they become miserable in their next life too? Or would the system notice the anomaly and fix it? ..... A woman with long violet hair and red eyes stared at the so called heaven that is falling apart. She is wearing a black long coat paired with black pants and black stiletto boots with black gloves covering her hands. She put back her sword in the scabbard after killing all the authors on the area. The so called heaven is full of bookshelves and books. There are tables and armchairs making it look like an office because of the white floors, white walls, and white ceiling. [Please stop this savegery character "Yurei", your family won't come back no matter what you do.] "I know. I'm just doing justice for my family." [The people who destroyed your family is already gone, what you're doing is not justice.] "It is. That f#cking author created that f#cking story and killed my family just for that bastard's character development!" [...] "You won't understand how I feel you f#cking system because you never had a family! I was entrapped in that place, I was tortured and all I could do was endure it! When I got out of that place, instead of getting back on Astraelyn, I got trapped on those f#cking dimensions full of monsters! I moved from one dimension to another dimension just to see my family and all I see was a f#cking tombstone!" [Calm down Yurei. You already killed all the authors, you have reached your purpose.] "You know what? I should destroy you too. You f#cking made me reincarnate in a character who will have a f#cked up future when I already had a miserable story in my past life! You f#cking violated your own rule!" [I'm sorry for what happened to you Yurei. I know what you feel and I know that it's my fault. So I'll try to make it up to you.] "There's nothing you can change for me Library! My... everything is gone... I..." [This will be the first time that I'll do this for a character so listen Yurei. I can bring back your family, just listen to what I have to say.] (A/N: I'm not very great at English but I'll try to make my sentences understandble. There will be grammatical errors and wrong spellings so if you're a writing perfectionist, this story is not for you.)

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :The Rise of Tempest
Volume 2 :Journey to Victory
Volume 3 :Linage journey and power
Volume 4 :Otherworld Arc: Taimanin

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Meta0202
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LunaKindred
LunaKindredLv3LunaKindred

Welp, the story is so cringe for me and im sure the author is a 100% chuuni due to his writing style. The plot itself is also cliche and mc is typical Japanese protagonist

InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1InternetSaint

MC kills his enemies? He is an anti-hero edgelord!

asaade9999
asaade9999Lv3asaade9999

1 star for having the MC of i am the fated villain cover while your own MC is a useless beta hero of justice type .................................................................

EvilBlueCrystal
EvilBlueCrystalLv1EvilBlueCrystal

Right at the start too many systems, abilities, rewards, points, ranks, and shops. No introduction or explaining anything, just straight up exercise, and npc thought process. First person very boring. Everything is power of friendship, effort, references to random anime and manga. Anything mc does or says is love, kindness, friendship, family, or harem related. Mc wants to learn martial arts but can copy anything instantly, and has universal level spiral abilities. Gets several techniques every chapter. System function sucks. Wish fulfillment plot, lame interactions of useless characters, street fights, nothing enjoyable or interesting.

ItIswhatItIs
ItIswhatItIsLv4ItIswhatItIs

O never knew killing your enemies who want to kill you is Edgelord behaviour. Like tell me you are stupid without telling me you are stupid. XD.

Takumoto
TakumotoLv3Takumoto

{Warning: Mc does NOT kill his enemies. If you want Anti-hero edgelord then this will not be for you.} The thing is, the MC is intentionally holding back from killing enemies, which results in a reduction of his power and effectiveness. He will let people who target his family alive? then they will try again because the MC don't kill You said "his enemies" why not kill if the person is targeting his family, i can't understand is not like the mc will use talk no jutsu and make the enemie become a ally (google translater, my english sucks)

SimpleReaderPassin
SimpleReaderPassinLv4SimpleReaderPassin

if killing someone who wants to kill you or your family makes you an antihero edgelord, then every soldier that fought on the frontline to protect their family is an edgelord?

Kyran_Ambrosius
Kyran_AmbrosiusLv14Kyran_Ambrosius

Overall the characters are extremely bland. I don't even feel like im reading a real persons thoights. Its all very robotic. Im half convinced this is an A.I. Story, the mc has bland motivations. Most of the characters are only ever talked about for a chapter or two then left alone for 10. Very pokemon gotta catch em all. A lot of the powers don't even fit the setting. A girl agrees to the harem then never seen again. over all had a decent start but it quickly goes downhill.

Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1Drako_0692

Well the note is out of kindness, the truth is I don't recommend this fanfic. That said, the system is nonsense and the protagonist's personality is not very charismatic, which makes him very flat. The classic justice motivation only works if the protagonist is charismatic or has a strong personality (since the emo hero is in fashion)

Juana_Viola
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Garland
GarlandLv4Garland

Reading the Summary and then reading the chapters showed me that this is nothing more but a typical harem story. The MC is overall not really that interesting, nothing about him is uniqur having a really bland personality. The strength is just their to make him look good for the female characters.Overall, just a basic story. Nothing really impressive or noteworthy.

CharlieRider
CharlieRiderLv4CharlieRider

so will the mc kill his opponents or enemies or be a hero of justice where he doesn't even dare to kill while saying some big words like you'll dirty my hands or i train to save people to protect not to kill if yes then author just reply <yes> if not not then <no>

Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4Ireallylikereading

since this mc doesnt kill his enemies does he atleast torture or cripple them, if not then yeah no i doubt this author can actually write something good with this.

DaoistJ2BfOl
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Ronaldo_Goat
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Mugiwaratensa
MugiwaratensaLv1Mugiwaratensa

I'm getting tired of this story. I'll explain how I feel about it. Let's take the last few chapters (First 20 chapters) : when I calculated the number of days in the week, unless I made a mistake I counted 8 days in a week. I found parts or paragraphs that were repeated as if copied and pasted into a chapter. I find it hard to understand what the author means, often as if the content has not been edited. There are numerous spelling errors. I made it to chapter 20, but the end of this chapter is incomprehensible. I want someone to explain to me : if it's Monday, why does Haruo say that the weekend is about to begin as if it were already Friday? I won't talk about how the characters of Rito and Kenichi are displayed in this story, they are slightly better treated than what I usually see in other fan-fics where they are vilified that it's annoying with the MC who is trash and a hypocrite. Now let's talk about what I liked about this story, I like the understanding between the MC and the original main characters (Rito and Kenichi), the MC's powers in particular the spiral energy.

JRZTT1246
JRZTT1246Lv2JRZTT1246

Wow I read the review and feel very sad. People hate author just because he didn't choose to kill. like they can try again, true but can't they get punish like sent to jail or lost everything they have. That 1 way to punish them to make them unable to do it again. I for 1 against the killing, because killing didn't change chit. You just kill one group of people only to cause someone higher up to grudge again you and cycle keep continue over and over. Not to mention, they didn't really get punish for it. Many decided to kill themselves then be punish, it was a way to escape accountability. To punish someone they must know what/why they did wrong and suffer consequence for it, and that can only happen when they are alive. I won't argue against those who read story and didn't like MC for anything else though, they have their opinion and they give this a try and just don't like it. And while I agree that maybe calling character who kill other an anti-hero edgelord might be overexaggerate. But in this side where majority of MC is overly edgelorde overpower who has no care for the world aside from their harem, it might not be that overly exaggerate.

Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3Kono_Timoda

Interesting story but the biggest problem, especially since this is a fighting novel, is that the fight scenes don't flow and it's pretty erratic and hard to follow preventing anyone from enjoying the battles.

LeviathanEnvy
LeviathanEnvyLv14LeviathanEnvy

Pretty standard story for me maybe because I’m more use to “bloodly?” Story I guess,the story’s not bad can’t say for the definite future but I wanted to ask about the no killing thing is it under the mentality all life is precious or something else because I saw taimanin arc and pretty sure it’s the whole demon gapists thing going on so is he not gonna kill them to and btw is he enforcing his whole no kill rule on others ?

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