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Ia, This fanfic relies so heavily on AI that it leaves a lot to be desired. The author justifies it by claiming the work is a goddamn masterpiece, only to churn out another 100 chapters with the exact same plot. It turns into a repetitive cycle that never goes anywhere—the story, the characters, and the situations all stagnate. Then it veers into politics—a political fanfic that rehashes the same arguments over and over. The author pulls yet another repetitive argument out of thin air, only to counter it with another repetitive argument. The protagonist is actually strong but pretends to be weak, then suddenly acts powerful thanks to a *deus ex machina*. There is a blatant bias regarding certain characters—which drags the political aspect down even further—and everyone is portrayed as an imbecile except for the protagonist. It abandons established character traits in favor of creating new ones whenever it suits the author.

donde quedaran las mega franquicias. digo al menos megaman, sony, mario, zelda, pokemon...?

I think you need to plan the story better and not focus so much on secondary characters; that completely killed the story and sent it in a direction that isn't even worth thinking about.

Why ? No sense.He looks like a kid playing with dolls, honestly; trying to make him look cool actually makes him look ridiculous.

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To much ia

you just installed a deux ex machina from the sleeve and you did it wrong. you revived all the people who loved majin buu, even before, I guess you haven't added them, but you left several out and it's already against the whole idea of drsgon ball

The power is disproportionate, he learned to be a goalkeeper in four training sessions. Being a striker, he trains yoga and already stretches as a cheerleader. They are very difficult skills to learn, but since he is Chinese, he learns for good wang chi and the high of heaven and the low of hell.

What bothers me is that it's always the same trick. The Chinese without financial education is more brilliant than a club president because he is European. We are talking about leagues that handle thousands of players, with specialized teams for that. The guy who was an expert couldn't and the oc arrives, and those are billions.

500,000 euros for a goal? How ridiculous, man, those contracts always have a standard and only superstars sign that nonsense. The most I have seen has been a bonus per goal of 5,000 thousand euros, which is no small thing with the salaries they spend. and in the second division they don't give a kid two million... even less so for a goalkeeper. Their squads are worth less than 10 million dollars, the entire squad.