asaade9999

another useless chapter

after 40 chapters this fanfic wordpadding became too high, one chapter alone is just for only one attack of the MC that's it, and the rest of the chapter was just the MC enemy reaction

useless chapter, the amount of word padding in this chapter was too high

trope

ok this fight is much better than the last one, he didn't do anything too stupid

his actually stupid, why didn't he take the head of the jonin so the yamanaka can tell his telling the truth, you made hiruzen a stupid fool to just believe his word without evidence

also rasa didn't kill the daimyo of the land of wind, only madara has the guts to kill a daimyo

the fight is stupid and too much, if he can used the hiding in water technique, why didn't he used that on the start and flee since there's a river nearby, and he made the battlefield full of water but used useless technique like hiding in plain water technique without doing anything, thats just stupid and a waste of chakra,

2 stars its ai made, and aside from that the dynamic between the MC and his Wife is non existent specially when he starts going on raid, the day will start with the MC preparing for the Raid and waiting for the caretaker and going home to sleep rinse and repeat, and there will be only occasional time the MC will take care of the wife, also MC gotten a card from his father in law instead of using it to heal his wife he doesn't even used it for no apparent reason.

tftc