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useless canon rehash
too much word padding later on that reading a whole chapter is useless, too much word padding later on that reading a whole chapter is useless, too much word padding later on that reading a whole chapter is useless,
it became useless canon rehash, luffy and everyone on the original crew will always be free, hell became a useless 2nd hand sidekick once the canon start
another useless chapter
after 40 chapters this fanfic wordpadding became too high, one chapter alone is just for only one attack of the MC that's it, and the rest of the chapter was just the MC enemy reaction
trope
ok this fight is much better than the last one, he didn't do anything too stupid
his actually stupid, why didn't he take the head of the jonin so the yamanaka can tell his telling the truth, you made hiruzen a stupid fool to just believe his word without evidence
also rasa didn't kill the daimyo of the land of wind, only madara has the guts to kill a daimyo