asaade9999

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useless canon rehash

too much word padding later on that reading a whole chapter is useless, too much word padding later on that reading a whole chapter is useless, too much word padding later on that reading a whole chapter is useless,

it became useless canon rehash, luffy and everyone on the original crew will always be free, hell became a useless 2nd hand sidekick once the canon start

another useless chapter

after 40 chapters this fanfic wordpadding became too high, one chapter alone is just for only one attack of the MC that's it, and the rest of the chapter was just the MC enemy reaction

trope

ok this fight is much better than the last one, he didn't do anything too stupid

his actually stupid, why didn't he take the head of the jonin so the yamanaka can tell his telling the truth, you made hiruzen a stupid fool to just believe his word without evidence

also rasa didn't kill the daimyo of the land of wind, only madara has the guts to kill a daimyo