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Kono_Timoda

Kono_Timoda

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda11 days ago
    Commented

    Will there be lemons or smut?

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda13 days ago
    Posted

    The story idea is great but the writing style and writing qualities very simple. It lacks descriptive language and complex dialogue that will give us story life. Currently it reads like a translation or like someone that is unfamiliar with the English language. I would still recommend this if you want an interesting take on the DxD world but be warned the quality isn't excellent, just slightly below average

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda13 days ago
    Replied to Samael_Son_of_Dawn

    Is there a harem in the future

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda18 days ago
    Replied to Xerxes_73

    Yeah in the current chapters Spoiler warning: He realizes he doesn't want to be a deadbeat anymore (Dracula arc) and we learn about his past traumas and why he turned out the way he did (magic coven arc) and we see him resolve his past and be determined to improving himself and being a better father for his children (Going home arc). In general it's a long read; chapters are thick and a lot of stuff happens but it's written well, you will have many emotional highs and lows but Ricky does change, if not slowly but noticeably.

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda20 days ago
    Commented

    DO BLACK CLOVER, EVERYBODY TALKS ABOUT THE BIG THREE BUT NOBODY DOES ANY SMUT / HAREM BLACK CLOVER FANFICS

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda23 days ago
    Posted

    Honestly this writer has huge potential I can see the framework of how complex his characters could be but as I just said it's potential. at the moment he lacks the ability to flesh out dialogues , character expression and how the characters behave; what they're thinking. honestly excellent starts but if you're looking for a well written Story by a seasoned writer they sent it.

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timodaa month ago
    Replied to RioRaRyu

    No lemons

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timodaa month ago
    Commented

    +1 for harem honestly, I came to this fic because I saw the harem tag and I was promised a harem, and because of that, I dropped this fic yesterday. I didn't bother reading the last chapter because I thought the harem was scrapped, but now that there is Hope, Men, I CALL YOU TO ARMS, my soldiers do not buckle or yield when faced with the cruelty of this world! MY SOLDIERS PUSH FORWARD! MY SOLDIERS SCREAM OUT! MY SOLDIERS RAGE!(read: vote for harem) PS: I posted this on the paragraph comment, but for those that can't read those comments, I posted it here so y'all can hear the call to arms!

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timodaa month ago
    Commented

    +1 honestly, I came to this fic because I saw the harem tag and I was promised a harem, and because of that, I dropped this fic yesterday. I didn't bother reading the last chapter because I thought the harem was scrapped, but now that there is Hope, Men, I CALL YOU TO ARMS, my soldiers do not buckle or yield when faced with the cruelty of this world! MY SOLDIERS PUSH FORWARD! MY SOLDIERS SCREAM OUT! MY SOLDIERS RAGE!(read: vote for harem)

  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timodaa month ago
    Posted

    A well deserved 4.7 rating fic It's slow paced with several comedic moments but offers a lot of World building theories adding a new take to the generic Naruto fanfic world. The romance is also quite entertaining, can't wait to see more.