Is there romance, I'm curious 🤔

It was an interesting fic I read it on Ao3 (same author) a d it was interesting but he had a challenge managing the down time between the events, and if you compare his other stories to this one, you can tell he has gotten better. This was complete late 2023, so it's not new on Ao3. If you are interested in a op harry with decent writing, I would recommend. Although there was a little Yuri because one of his harem members were a couple before meeting Harry but yeah, it was good 👍🏾.

I thought the Chinese was like 100+ by now (like how all chinese fanfic authors are) Is the romance bad or is it bland?

That's cool, will you add lemons ? And what's the upload schedule, if you push until you pass this novel you could gain more readers ¯⁠\⁠_⁠(⁠ ͡⁠°⁠ ͜⁠ʖ⁠ ͡⁠°⁠)⁠_⁠/⁠¯

Dumb, but very interesting and entertaining. The MC gives off the "for the boys" vibes, I like the change to the Naruto system, I want to see how far this will go. will the motivations of some characters change? how will the new system affect combat? Honestly just waiting for a backlog so I can binge read. I can't wait to see how the author makes the Naruto story his own.

You forgot that Gods exist in dxd, what one measly little human with some arbitrary power going to do?

Nope, think of it like "Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires" by Over_The_Moon69, there is smut but the mc still needs to master his powers, just that he has no by threats yet, so nothing is happening and for now it's mostly drama and feelings.

This does not deserve to be in the 3 - 4 range, this atleast deserves a 4.5 or even 4.8. The writing style is great The grammar is natural and reads like a native speaker There is tension and suspense There is world-building (which is what people are getting confused about - basically, MC was reborn in dxd because his past gf was a god so he got some of Anubis powers in the form of a system). Its not a complete wish fulfilment with crappy pacing. You need to read and focus in order to understand. The author is being creative, I don't know why people p*ssed when the author is trying something new. TLDR: this fic needs some love, it doesn't have the quality nor should it have the rating of a third-rate wishfulfilment dxd fic 🔥

I forget how bad the giggle physics was in dxd 😬

I like the interacts it's very sweet

I like the lemons, I get that it can be challenging, if you want inspiration, ao3 has a wide range of lemon stories, some are emotionally tense while others are quick. I don't know anything about hsr and I'm barely keeping up with genshin by itself. I can understand why you want to write it but I prefer to focus on genshin, purely because that is what I came for. On webnovel, it depends on how detailed you are. Personally, I think 2000 is barely enough for a fleshed out story while 5000+ can begin to feel exhausting, especially if nothing happens. I would say stick to the high 3000s - 4000s. Enough to make you think the story is progressing without burning you out too much.

So far it's been a great Naruto World building fanfiction and I can see the author is trying to make a very logical fanfiction. But, 30 chapters in and he's still explain the intricacies of the Hugo Clan so not much can be said...🤷‍♂️ It's well written though, and it's not as boring as you might think 🤔

Very entertaining chapter

I haven't read this yet so I'm wondering if I should just read the remake instead

Not gonna lie, this turned from a high intensity, "nah, I'd adapt" FF to a "clean up on isle 4 please, pssssht(that's the sound of the intercom turning off)

I saw the "because it's me" line a mile away 😂

She needs a little alen in her life, or at least some type of love.

Remember when you said you were looking for waifus? well why not add the Rick's daughter (not the house wife) the bounty Hunter one.

Author, please add the reaction from the chat to each girl for the next chapter

Right 😤