Kono_Timoda

This chapter starts somewhere in the future and is not congruent with chapter 3

I just read the first three chapters and it’s a dope concept, but I feel like a lot of people on webnovel Don’t really like female main characters including myself so this will be a skip for me.

Who is that?

Good

Yey

It's creative but it is more of a fix-it style fic than your usual power fantasy. Usually this would not be a problem but the writing style feels very exposition heavy. The prologues are the worst offenders but the style remains present.

I love this story. Is it perfect, no but compared to the never ending translated slop on this site. It really good. It's so creative and you can feel the different characters personalities. It's not your generic bland self insert. Usually I HATE OP mc's because it turns into one punch man with no comedy or personality. But the authors pacing and the way of writing interesting dialogue is keeping me hooked. The smut needs some work but otherwise, let the harem grow.

A shameless weak to strong Mc that clearly values creativity over the smut. Worth a read. I just binged the 40 chapters and it's now 5 am. The humor is pretty naughty so it might not be for everyone.

Usually, whenever you see me a smut Harry Potter book, It can swing both ways; you either get a gold mine or you get diarrhea. surprised this is not gold mine but a Silver mine; it’s not perfect, but it has a lot character. Imma follow. It’s most impressive trait is that it is not a wishful filament smut slop. you can tell that the author has an idea of what he wants to do and it’s not a cliché plot either. The dialog feels primative/simple at times, but it is very readable. A solid 6/10 with great potential to be an 8/10 or 9/10 depending on how the plot goes as well as the upload schedule.

Honestly loving it compared to the usually dxd harem trope slop. I really love how much time the author is taking to fleshout the mc's friends and family. Personaly I think the exposition of the first few chapters are needed since the author needs to deconstruct Riser's villain persona from our minds. I also love the focus on creativity and not the girls although that's reason I am watching a dxd fic and not a fate fic. I think the best thing about this fic so far is it's ability to keep me interested in the slice of life moments: I usually hate them with a passion but this fic isn't bad. It's very entertaining.