Garland

Man, it has been a while since i last read this story and also, it has been a while since it was updated. Overall i do wonder if you are planning on continuing to write this, do some changes or go on a full rewrite considering the latest updates in One Piece has been especially with Imu.

Meh, not even generic but just plain bad in crossover. Really? You have to make him related to Negi and have him be the only male in what is pretty much in the Mahora Girl's Junior High? Like, as much as i complain about the generic, let's turn the other MC into an Assistant Teacher, this is even breaking all kinds of established ruled with the most bland and terrible excuse on why it happened. I don't even need to bother reading it anymore because i can see much that this is just gonig to turn into another generic, nice guy Shirou Emiya. Pretty much no different to those generic naruto crossovers.

That was an interesting addition. Didn't think that Silver would have connection with Loki through her old long gone Familia Members

Damn, that reveal in the end is wild. Looks like dude has some not so average backstory.

Man, glad you are back. This story has been on and off and on and off again man, i tend to think it just stopped. Still, i'm happy that its being updated. The story has been getting good with certain parts and really i;m just happy to see more with more things happening especially the whole deal with Mt. Lady.

It would be goos to have more character interaction with the whole approaching Winter Festival of the story. Sure he could still go on the dungeon to earn some money but have him interact with characters more unless going into the dungeon will have more than just the usual monster killing.

Well i'm overall enjoying the direction where this is going. More character interactions and the surprise meeting and fight against Ottar. This is the kind of change i really like. Silver in the previous version was kinda a lone wolf which was understandable at first since he was kinda laying low but when the Hestia Familia grew, it kinda became problematic. He put the role on Daphne and really didn't do the whole Captain thing well. The whole recruiting and having more members didn't really do much in terms of the story as they only appeared at certain times but nothing much. Kinda made the whole recruting thing pointless since we never see him interact with them more and were just left.

So pretty much Hestia huh? Kinda disappointed but oh well, i'll see what actual changes are. Besides that, i think i'll put this story on hold and wait for more chapters. Since its just following the original with some changes, its gonna be a while before things actually start getting interesting to read once again. I mean, the old version was at chapter 300+ and a lot of things happened.

Wait what? What is going on? I'm kinda confused on what is happening. Is it Hestia or Loki? I mean, the whole previous chapter just said alternative but now Chapter 17 is following Hestia. So what's the deal?

Yeah at this point, it would be better to just continue with Silver being in the Loki Familia. You already planned to make major changes, if not then why even bother making this New Version if Silver did go again to the Hestia Familia. The interaction with Loki and Silver have already began to grow and it would be fun to see him interact with the rest of the Loki Familia. At this point, just keep him with them and don't even bother with the whole transferring to another Familia like with the Hestia Familia because really, why even go this route if he was meant to be with Hestia in the end.