webnovel

My Vampire System: A Dragon's Revenge

Author: JKSManga
Fantasy
Completed · 17.4M Views
  • 533 Chs
    Content
  • 4.4
    661 ratings
  • NO.200+
    SUPPORT
Synopsis

"Ray Talen, what type of name is that, that name does not fit me." Sen, the last and most powerful dragon left roaming the skies causing chaos and destruction across the land. When all hope is lost the human race call upon their last hope, a powerful witch. Unable to destroy the dragon the witch uses the last of her power to cast a spell. Sen has not been defeated but has now been reborn as a human. How will Sen live his life now as a human who he once despised and saw as weak? Aka : My Dragon System/ Revenge Begins at Age 5/ Reincarnated into a Human? Completed Novel The First book, in the Talen/My Vampire System Series. Read My Vampire System next! P.A.T.R.E.O.N JKSmanga for more content and support. https://www.patreon.com/JKSManga Discord link https://discord.gg/huTJG43

Tags
10 tags
Chapter 1A New Life

The humans had finally done it. After centuries of trying, they had succeeded in defeating him.

The one and only Great Dragon Sen.

They had tried and failed countless times, but after a thousand years, they had finally won.

That witch… Who was she? Had there always been someone that powerful among them?

The details of his final moments were hazy. Perhaps it was due to his old age. The humans had always sought his destruction. No matter where he tried to make his home, they would come, unprovoked, to attack. They had chased his kind to the ends of the earth, slaughtered his friends, his family—everyone he had ever loved—until he was the last one left.

With nothing remaining, he had only done what was just. An eye for an eye, as the humans would say. He had heard them shout that phrase at him before.

But now, it was over. He could finally rest in peace.

Or so he thought.

Just as he was coming to terms with his death, strange noises began to fill his mind.

"It's a boy! A beautiful baby boy!"

He wanted to roar in frustration. Who dared interrupt his final moments?

What was happening? Hadn't he finally moved on?

"Look at him. He's so cute!"

Cute? Someone had the audacity to call Sen the Almighty Dragon cute?

Summoning his strength, he forced his eyes open, determined to see who would dare make such a claim. At first, everything was blurry, but as his vision cleared, he found himself staring at an unfamiliar sight.

A human. A female human. He had never seen one up close before, and now he found himself examining her features. She had long black hair and an egg-shaped face. Dark bags hung beneath her eyes, signs of exhaustion, yet she still smiled warmly. But the most shocking thing of all was her size.

She was gigantic.

Was this hell? Some form of punishment where he was tormented by giant humans for all those he had slain?

Whoever this human was, she wasn't ordinary. He needed to escape. Using all his strength, he tried to take flight—

Nothing happened.

A sudden realization struck him. He couldn't feel his wings.

Panic surged through him as he looked down at his body, dread creeping into his bones.

This was no nightmare. This was reality.

He was a human baby.

Next to the woman stood a man, staring at him like a predator sizing up its prey.

These vicious humans…

"Look at him squirming. Can I hold him?" the man asked.

Before Sen could protest, the woman handed him over. He tried to resist, but his body refused to cooperate. No matter how many commands he gave, nothing worked. He tried to roar in protest, but all that came out was a pitiful wail.

As the man held him, the crying ceased. Even though he lacked control over his body, he could at least decide when to make noise.

"Oh, he stopped crying. I think he likes his daddy."

The man grinned down at him, a look that Sen found utterly revolting.

If only he could fight back.

Wait.

Wasn't this the perfect opportunity? A second chance. A chance to finish what he had failed to do before. Just as the humans had wiped out his race, now he had the chance to do the same to them.

He would have his revenge.

"Ga, ga ga ga."

"Look at his cute laugh. He seems to be in a good mood now."

Foolish man. He would be the first to fall.

Summoning all his energy, Sen focused on his mouth, gathering saliva. He could feel the bubbles forming. His plan was working.

"What's wrong with him? It looks like he's about to be sick."

As the man leaned in closer, Sen seized his chance. He expelled the liquid from his mouth with all his might, sending a perfect arc of spit onto the man's face.

The man recoiled in disgust and quickly handed him back to the woman.

"Yuck! I think he did that on purpose!"

"Ga, ga, ga." Sen let out a triumphant laugh.

The woman only smiled. "Looks like you're going to grow up to be a troublemaker."

A sudden wave of exhaustion hit him. His brief act of defiance had drained him completely. He fought against the drowsiness, but it was no use. His body betrayed him once again.

Damn this weak human form…

You May Also Like

The Monster King's Legacy

After being diagnosed with a rare terminal illness, all Lance could do was wait for his death, unable to move as he lay on the hospital bed for months. In his last moments, all he wished for is another chance at life, so he can live, but fate plays a fast one on him. Shortly after death, Lance wakes up in the middle of a gruesome massacre and battle between two goblin tribes. At the end of the skirmish, Lance is captured by the female goblin tribe, and just when he was about to lose everything again, he makes a promise to lead the goblins to victory. Out of desperation, they agree, and later on, Lance becomes an unsuspecting leader of a goblin tribe as a human. Now, surrounded by unsuspecting goblin beauties, Lance vows to life a fulfilling life in this new world while leading his people to prosperity! ... A/N: Hey, dear reader... read the book, you'll love it. There will be lemons as always, just not with the same intensity and frequency as my last book. I plan to focus more on the story and relationships than flavour scenes at every turn. Though the main character is not a villain type, he isn't a goodie two shoes either. No Rape. No NTR. No Yuri. No Netori. I plan to write something where the MC's harem aren't just brainless meat sacks, but actually impact the story and the MC. Read the book, you'll love it! Also, this is my discord server link:- https://discord.com/invite/Rjfy3Rkgwt The server is rather inactive for the time being, but please, do join let's turn it into a thriving space.

ZombieMann · Fantasy
4.5
115 Chs
Table of Contents
Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 :Avrion Academy
Volume 2 :The Prophecies Begin
Volume 3 :Avrion Academy Tournament
Volume 4 :The Divine Being
Volume 5 :A New Start
Volume 6 :Roland Academy
Volume 7 :Werewolf Mania
Volume 8 :Final Preparations
Volume 9 :The promised year
Volume 10 :Road to 1000

ratings

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background
Reviews
Liked
Newest
TheGoodAce
TheGoodAceLv11
GianP
GianPLv6

So I should leave a review since I had great hope for this novel, but was disappointed. I will list the problems: 1. Grammar ...simply, it sucks. I can understand that English is not the author's first language, but there are like 10 grammar mistakes each chapter. Please, use a proofreader it's really distracting from the story. There, they're and their are different. Please learn it. 2. Writing style The limites of the language hits hard in the style department. Since the author doesn't master the language, phrases are always linear and simple, concepts are expressed one at a time etc... This impacts the story since it seems the actors themselves are basic. 3. Plot holes, world building, etc I understand you don't want infodumps, and you also don't want to spoiler the story but... Seriously, try to give a reason for things happening, and not at chapter 1000 since people will not arrive there. Sen is acting like a true 5 yo even being a 1000 yo dragon. Is there a good reason? Maybe. Without explaining, or even an hypotesis, this is simply a plot hole. Whatever is inside the mind of the author doesn't count, only what is written. And don't go "but normal books can explain after 200 pages, why can't I?" Normal books are supposed to be perfect in language use, have been read and revisited multiple time by the author and the editor team, so the reader is somewhat assured that the story is somewhat decent. On webnovel the author publishes BEFORE finishing the story and often before checking for errors. Maybe in chapter 300 the author is like "oooops for plot reason I need this in chapter 30... Too bad it's already published. Let's hope nobody notices" while in a normal book you would go and modify chapter 30 to be coherent. Now, I have gone for a bit of a rant here. TL;DR: the story is simple but ha potential... Wasted because of poor English and oversimplification

El_Shadi
El_ShadiLv13
AshWritesThings
AshWritesThingsLv2
Kergonan
KergonanLv15

So I'm going to keep it short, because I've wasted too much of my time on that novel. I've read this story because it is the first in JKSManga's System trilogy. My Vampire System has been continuously ranked in Webnovel's top ten for over a year and I want to read its prequels before I get to it. Well, MDS is a beginner novel and it shows. The MC is good, some side characters are alright, but the rest of the cast is average to bad. The background is barebone. The power system is vague, badly implemented and the worst I've ever read. The story is awful, incomplete, full of deus ex machina and feels overall artifical, leading to a rushed and unsatisfactory ending. Finally, the writing is terrible, full of typos, bad grammar, characters confusions, mistakes on homophones. Really, I work as an English teacher, and none of my students, even the worst of them, would make so many errors. I hope JKSManga took an editor/proofreader with his other novels, otherwise, reading them will be a torture. So, I hope the next volumes of the My System trilogy are better, it seems they are, but after such an experience, it will be some time before I read the second book. My final verdict is a 1 out of 10 (my first). If you want to read a very good/excellent dragon-themed novel, go for Coiling Dragon by I Eat Tomatoes, that's the novel that brought me to Chinese novels, and it is awesome. Now if you excuse me, I'm going to read Martial Arts Master by Cuttlefish That Loves Diving, an excellent author, who so far never has disappointed me. Kergonan out

Mr_parsa
Mr_parsaLv4

SUPPORT