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ClaireYsabella
ClaireYsabellaLv35yr
2019-12-28 18:36

This is a different and unique take on the classic dragon story, as you can probably glean from the title. And the author wastes no time--you're immediately plunged into what can be considered a dragon's existential dilemma: what happens if the predator suddenly becomes reborn as its usual prey? There are some punctuation and capitalization errors tht I hope the author can polish, but if you can get past that, this is an entertaining story. I also like the humor--the baby's seemingly innocent behavior and antics turn out to be actually the dragon's "rebellion". And that's only for starters. Currently, the pacing is fast, so I'm intrigued where the entire tale would lead to. Can't wait!

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CeeCeeYasuko
CeeCeeYasukoLv15

I agree with you

Mortenlor
MortenlorLv5

Delete this post. Xp post.

Mortenlor
MortenlorLv5

Delete this post. Xp posts.

AustinSargent
AustinSargentLv14

Sounds interesting

moodycrowl
moodycrowlLv1

Can you please check my novel "Rise of Void Dragons"? It'll be good if you like it and vote for it as it's participating in WPC.

Cliff_01
Cliff_01Lv4

Same thoughts here

Alex_T_9640
Alex_T_9640Lv2

interesting

cod_Ortega
cod_OrtegaLv3

gud

Monisola_Adedokun
Monisola_AdedokunLv2

Same thought

Orange_Jo
Orange_JoLv14

Its minor errors so i dont really mind also im not sure if this is written in English or translated so this book is exceptional and i cant wait for the other entries in the series to be done

Khubaib_Tambe
Khubaib_TambeLv4

At last this novel has a connection with My Vampire Diaries, hooraay!

1magreat_man
1magreat_manLv1

can any one read my book it's bootiful.

Deku_Deku_3204
Deku_Deku_3204Lv3

Get hit with the unlucky

moodycrowl:Can you please check my novel "Rise of Void Dragons"? It'll be good if you like it and vote for it as it's participating in WPC.
Iron_Man_3000
Iron_Man_3000Lv14

Then why rated five stars… I can understand a 4-4.5 stars if there were punctuation issues… Not a full 5 ever… unless it was done by a seasoned author and editor and a fluent translator

DaoistHcMiNg
DaoistHcMiNgLv1

Alright

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TheGoodAce
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GianP
GianPLv6

So I should leave a review since I had great hope for this novel, but was disappointed. I will list the problems: 1. Grammar ...simply, it sucks. I can understand that English is not the author's first language, but there are like 10 grammar mistakes each chapter. Please, use a proofreader it's really distracting from the story. There, they're and their are different. Please learn it. 2. Writing style The limites of the language hits hard in the style department. Since the author doesn't master the language, phrases are always linear and simple, concepts are expressed one at a time etc... This impacts the story since it seems the actors themselves are basic. 3. Plot holes, world building, etc I understand you don't want infodumps, and you also don't want to spoiler the story but... Seriously, try to give a reason for things happening, and not at chapter 1000 since people will not arrive there. Sen is acting like a true 5 yo even being a 1000 yo dragon. Is there a good reason? Maybe. Without explaining, or even an hypotesis, this is simply a plot hole. Whatever is inside the mind of the author doesn't count, only what is written. And don't go "but normal books can explain after 200 pages, why can't I?" Normal books are supposed to be perfect in language use, have been read and revisited multiple time by the author and the editor team, so the reader is somewhat assured that the story is somewhat decent. On webnovel the author publishes BEFORE finishing the story and often before checking for errors. Maybe in chapter 300 the author is like "oooops for plot reason I need this in chapter 30... Too bad it's already published. Let's hope nobody notices" while in a normal book you would go and modify chapter 30 to be coherent. Now, I have gone for a bit of a rant here. TL;DR: the story is simple but ha potential... Wasted because of poor English and oversimplification

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