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IN THE ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE WITH MY KILLING SYSTEM

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WebNovel で公開されている、Madara_Uchiha_6218 の作者が書いた IN THE ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE WITH MY KILLING SYSTEM の小説を読んでください。In the year 2029, a catastrophic event shatters the tranquility and plunges humanity into chaos. People are transformed into mindless beings, driven by an insatiable hunger to attack others, amidst th...

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In the year 2029, a catastrophic event shatters the tranquility and plunges humanity into chaos. People are transformed into mindless beings, driven by an insatiable hunger to attack others, amidst this turmoil, animals undergo a horrifying mutation, transforming into scary and atrocious monstrous. Meet David, a determined survivor who embarks on a perilous journey to find peace and safety, but he is not alone in his quest. Instead of a team, he is accompanied by his loyal and steadfast best friend, Max, a dog who has also been affected by the mutations. Together, David and Max navigate the treacherous landscape, encountering both human and beastly adversaries along the way. Their bond is unbreakable, and they rely on each other's strength and instincts to overcome the countless challenges they face. As they traverse the desolate ruins of civilization, seeking clues to the origins of the disaster. Along the way, they encounter other survivors, forming fleeting alliances and facing moral dilemmas that test their resolve. In this post-apocalyptic world, where danger lurks around every corner, David and Max must rely on their wits, resourcefulness, and the unbreakable bond between man and dog. Together, they strive to live a wonderful life in a world teetering on the edge of darkness. Will David and Max succeed in their mission, or will they succumb to the overwhelming odds stacked against them? Join them on their thrilling and emotional journey as they face the horrors of a world gone mad and how they struggle to find their place in it.

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Madara_Uchiha_6218
Madara_Uchiha_6218作者Madara_Uchiha_6218

I like the fact that the writer did research when he wrote the novel, I like the fact that the mc is actually realistic.a normal reaction towards zombies In real life Is fear not oh zombies. writing a novel is hard but updating a novel every day is a whole different thing.I recommend you to read it

The_Smiling_Void
The_Smiling_VoidLv3The_Smiling_Void

Well the world background is lacking, needs more

Madara_Uchiha_6218
Madara_Uchiha_6218作者Madara_Uchiha_6218

read this novel, realistic mc, apocalypse and a decent updating stability.

LittleRedsWolf
LittleRedsWolfLv5LittleRedsWolf

You need to add a synopsis on the main page for readers to know what your story is about or to make them interested. In the first chapter, you repeatedly state the same thing in subsequent paragraphs. David brought his food in and went to the basement. he went to the basement and stored his food, etc. You had stated his parents left him and his dog. I would suggest taking the paragraphs about this and condensing them a bit. Maybe use a thesaurus to find better or different words to use. Abandoned is a good one to fit the situation. If you clean up your writing style a little, the story will flow better. It currently reads kind of stilted, somewhat like reading an actors' script. Overall, it's not bad for your first story. I would suggest using grammerly. You can also read your story out loud to yourself. Your mind will pick out things that don't sound or read right. I'm going to add this to my library to see how it develops.

Raphis
RaphisLv3Raphis

"Sorry, do you want to exchange reviews with me?"

Madara_Uchiha_6218
Madara_Uchiha_6218作者Madara_Uchiha_6218

Hey guys, I'm the writer here and so please do not count this as I am just trying to rate my book very high. it is actually good and I think you might want to read it.

Madara_Uchiha_6218
Madara_Uchiha_6218作者Madara_Uchiha_6218

good novel, the starting chapters weren't the best but it kept getting better and better and at least he doesn't take too long to release a new chapter

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