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My Dragon System

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Sen, the last and most powerful dragon left roaming the skies causing chaos and destruction across the land. When all hope is lost the human race call upon their last hope, a powerful witch. Unable to destroy the dragon the witch uses the last of her power to cast a spell. Sen has not been defeated but has now been reborn as a human. How will Sen live his life now as a human who he once despised and saw as weak? Completed Novel The first book in the Trilogy SYSTEM series Read My Vampire System next! P.A.T.R.E.O.N JKSmanga for more content and support. https://www.patreon.com/JKSManga Discord link https://discord.gg/huTJG43 Post art work and more+

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Chapter 1A New Life

I never thought the humans would be able to do it, but it seems like they have finally succeeded in defeating me.

Me…the one and only Great Dragon Sen.

They tried and tried again and after 1000 years, they finally succeeded.

That witch…who was she?

Was there always someone that powerful among them?

I couldn't remember the exact details of the events that happened before my death. I guess it's the old age. I remember the humans were always out to get me. Whenever I would find a place to call home, humans would come and attack for no reason.

They chased and chased my kind.

They killed my friends, my family, everyone I loved until I was the only one left. With nothing and no one left, I could only return the favour.

An eye for an eye as the humans would say. I heard a human shout that phrase at me as he was attacking me one time.

But it's over now. I can finally rest in peace.

As I was finally coming to terms with my death, I started to hear strange noises entering my head.

"It's a boy, a beautiful baby boy!"

I wanted to shout at whoever was ruining my final moments of rest.

What happened? Wasn't I meant to finally move on?

"Look at him. He's so cute!"

Cute?! Who would dare call Sen the almighty dragon cute?

I tried to take a look at the fools who would be taking their last breaths.

As I finally found the strength to open my eyes, two blurry figures started to come into my view. Slowly my blurry vision started to clear. At last I was able to see in front of me.

It was a human. A female human, I started to examine her closely as I had never seen a human this close before. She had long black hair with an egg-shaped face. Under her eyes were two huge black bags, but even though she looked tired she couldn't help but smile. The thing that shocked me the most was how gigantic this woman was.

Was this hell? Was I being tortured by giant humans for all those I had killed?

Whoever this human was, she wasn't ordinary, I had to escape. I used all my strength and tried to fly away.

Even if they are gigantic, they could never get me in the sky.

When I tried to fly, nothing happened. Then I realised I couldn't even feel my wings.

My back...they're gone! What happened to my wings? I slowly started to look down at my body and could see I was right…this was hell.

I was a human baby.

Next to the woman was a man just staring at me like I was a piece of meat. These vicious humans…

"Look at him squirming. Can I hold him?"

The woman began to pass me on to the man next to her. I tried my best to resist but I couldn't control my body. Every command I gave to my body just didn't seem to work. I tried shouting in protest but all that came out was sound of crying.

As the man held me in his hands, I stopped trying to shout. The crying in the room had stopped. Even though I had no control over my body, I could at least decide when I could make noise or not.

"Oh, he stopped crying. I think he likes his daddy"

The man was staring at me with a creepy smile.

If only I could fight back.

Wait a moment…wasn't this the perfect opportunity? I had a second chance. The chance to complete what I couldn't do before. Just like they had done to my race, now I had the chance to do the same to theirs. I could get my revenge and kill all humans.

"Ga, ga ga ga"

"Look at his cute laugh. He seems to be in a good mood now"

This stupid man. I will have my revenge with you first. I tried to focus all my energy into my mouth and tongue. I slowly gathered the saliva in my mouth waiting for it to build up. It was working…I could feel the bubbles building up in my mouth.

"What's wrong with him? It looks like he's about to be sick."

As the man got closer to my face, I knew this was my chance! I opened my mouth and expelled the liquid from my mouth as hard and as far as I could. The spit flew the short distance and landed right on his face. The man flinched and quickly gave me back to the woman.

"Yuck. I think he did that on purpose!"

"Ga, ga, ga" I started to laugh at the pathetic human.

The woman smiled.

"Looks like you're going to grow up to be a troublemaker."

I started to feel tired. Was all the energy I had consumed trying to control my mouth? Hadn't I just woken up? I tried to fight off the drowsiness but had no success. It was as if someone had put a spell on me. This weak human body…

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The Invincible Full-Moon System

The sinful acts of humanity bring forth a great calamity upon themselves, or so they thought. Supernatural Emergence happened. Supernatural creatures start to come out of nowhere and forcefully claim half of the Earth and massacre any humans that cross their paths. All of them are too powerful, dozens of countries fall under their diabolic claws. Humanity was pushed against the corner. But things started to turn around when humanity began to awaken magical powers. Awakened is the name for those who awaken these powers blessed by the Gods, and they become the pillars of humanity. Rex Silverstar is a normal boy who has a traumatic experience. On the day of the Supernatural Emergence, a Werewolf takes everything he has. He lost his family and his home, left alone in this cruel world. What drives him to live every day is his deep hatred towards the Supernaturals. Joining the military in the hope of helping exterminate the Supernaturals from an early age, he found out that it's impossible to kill the Werewolf that was responsible for killing his parents without being an Awakened. On a fateful night, in a near-death experience, he's given a chance by the full moon. It was the turning point of his life. Obtaining a System that allows him to become stronger, having the potential to match and surpass the Supernaturals, Rex was ecstatic until he saw his stats window. "I'M NOT A WEREWOLF!!" "Daily quest failed, sanity stat has been decreased by 20%!" "Sanity stat is too low, you are unable to contain the blood moon blessing!" "Starting forceful transformation!" "WHAT?! I'm a human! What transformation?!" "You are overwhelmed with bloodlust!" ----- Join my discord: https://discord.gg/cg6a5sBkpJ Support me here: https://ko-fi.com/mrboogey13 ----- I do not own the cover of the book, if you made it and want to take it down just say so and I will immediately change it.

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4.3
398 Chs
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Jilid 0 :Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1 :Avrion Academy
Jilid 2 :The Prophecies Begin
Jilid 3 :Avrion Academy Tournament
Jilid 4 :The Divine Being
Jilid 5 :A New Start
Jilid 6 :Roland Academy
Jilid 7 :Werewolf Mania
Jilid 8 :Final Preparations
Jilid 9 :The promised year
Jilid 10 :Road to 1000

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TheGoodAce
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GianP
GianPLv6

So I should leave a review since I had great hope for this novel, but was disappointed. I will list the problems: 1. Grammar ...simply, it sucks. I can understand that English is not the author's first language, but there are like 10 grammar mistakes each chapter. Please, use a proofreader it's really distracting from the story. There, they're and their are different. Please learn it. 2. Writing style The limites of the language hits hard in the style department. Since the author doesn't master the language, phrases are always linear and simple, concepts are expressed one at a time etc... This impacts the story since it seems the actors themselves are basic. 3. Plot holes, world building, etc I understand you don't want infodumps, and you also don't want to spoiler the story but... Seriously, try to give a reason for things happening, and not at chapter 1000 since people will not arrive there. Sen is acting like a true 5 yo even being a 1000 yo dragon. Is there a good reason? Maybe. Without explaining, or even an hypotesis, this is simply a plot hole. Whatever is inside the mind of the author doesn't count, only what is written. And don't go "but normal books can explain after 200 pages, why can't I?" Normal books are supposed to be perfect in language use, have been read and revisited multiple time by the author and the editor team, so the reader is somewhat assured that the story is somewhat decent. On webnovel the author publishes BEFORE finishing the story and often before checking for errors. Maybe in chapter 300 the author is like "oooops for plot reason I need this in chapter 30... Too bad it's already published. Let's hope nobody notices" while in a normal book you would go and modify chapter 30 to be coherent. Now, I have gone for a bit of a rant here. TL;DR: the story is simple but ha potential... Wasted because of poor English and oversimplification

El_Shadi
El_ShadiLv13
AshWritesThings
AshWritesThingsLv2
Kergonan
KergonanLv15

So I'm going to keep it short, because I've wasted too much of my time on that novel. I've read this story because it is the first in JKSManga's System trilogy. My Vampire System has been continuously ranked in Webnovel's top ten for over a year and I want to read its prequels before I get to it. Well, MDS is a beginner novel and it shows. The MC is good, some side characters are alright, but the rest of the cast is average to bad. The background is barebone. The power system is vague, badly implemented and the worst I've ever read. The story is awful, incomplete, full of deus ex machina and feels overall artifical, leading to a rushed and unsatisfactory ending. Finally, the writing is terrible, full of typos, bad grammar, characters confusions, mistakes on homophones. Really, I work as an English teacher, and none of my students, even the worst of them, would make so many errors. I hope JKSManga took an editor/proofreader with his other novels, otherwise, reading them will be a torture. So, I hope the next volumes of the My System trilogy are better, it seems they are, but after such an experience, it will be some time before I read the second book. My final verdict is a 1 out of 10 (my first). If you want to read a very good/excellent dragon-themed novel, go for Coiling Dragon by I Eat Tomatoes, that's the novel that brought me to Chinese novels, and it is awesome. Now if you excuse me, I'm going to read Martial Arts Master by Cuttlefish That Loves Diving, an excellent author, who so far never has disappointed me. Kergonan out

Mr_parsa
Mr_parsaLv4

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