Reviews of Nonn
Nonn
Dara_Manuel
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The flow of the story is really good and the description is very detailed. I'm usually not a fan of modern genres, but the plot of the story pretty much had me hooked to know how Jane will face her dilemma. The main character is also rather interesting in that things don't always seem to go her way. Yet, the obsession in this story seems rather interesting to me. To be honest, I don't know what I need to criticize about this since the story plot and flow is really good. I can't wait to see more of this!
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When I read the synopsis I thought this piece was already at an interesting point. When I read the first chapter, I had already fallen in love with the characters and the author's writing style. However, there are some grammatical issues and I've noticed how some sentences do not start off with a capital letter. I like the characters, I do enjoy their personalities, but I feel as if they could be more fleshed out. Although there are twenty-two chapters as of right now, I'm still not clear with the world background. I believe the pacing of the story is a tad bit bumpy, but I still like the story. Despite those problems, this story is interesting and I would love to see more come from it. I will add this to my library when more chapters are released.
This was honestly a good read overall, I enjoyed everything so far and got to say the Author really knows how to pull us in, the characters are well made and the writing is good (a few mistakes here and there, but like I always say it does not hinder a good story and can be fixed with ease and time) All in all keep it going Author!
This is one has a lot of potential to be a goody. Nice pacing, easy in the eyes. How can I help you further develop this piece. Hmnn. I kindly suggest that you focus more on 'showing not telling'. E.g. 'He said angrily' - you can change it into 'he slowly moves his gait towards me, I saw deep valleys and mountains building its way on his forehead. Ah, he's angry.' It will help you develop the personalities of your character. Hope this helps. May the author write more, edit more, and learn more!
hey dear, first of all interesting synopsis... loved the twins interaction and hated james girlfriend mia, she is such a... your story building is good, with nice interpretation, and lastly... Your story needs lot more exposure than this, I think dear,you need to add tags so that many audience will read, your story has humour then add comedy, that placenta joke all , it fits the bill, add tragic past, doting siblings, love, angst, everything u remember, it will get exposure...uy could add up to 10 tags... keep up the good work, [img=update]
Your story is really immersive and interesting. I am chapter 5 where Jane received a call from Jaden. I hope he is okay. I was just eager to post the review, will continue with the rest of the story. Loving the characters and the plot both. The main reason its good because I find the writing style of this author really easy to understand. Good Work.:)
