the fact that three dots 64 comments is hilarious
why is he assuming that everyone killed somebody else to their survival? did he forget that they had to kill one or more living "things". someone could have killed an ant and passed
i'm so 😕
into the unknown!
it's called plot armor my dude
he starts cursing?
Of course. I'll provide all if the neccessary info so you can NOT be confused.
I've noticed how you describe the characters. I like it, but I do have a question. Is River concluding this or you as the author?
I know, right?
oh my gosh, I just noticed that!
Ah,I'm sorry to see that you didn't enjoy the story. I promise you that I will try and fix grammatical mistakes. Again, sorry for the inconvenience.
Every time you come downstairs after you wake up: "Did you clean your room?" "Did you do your laundry yesterday?" "Did you take a shower?" "Did you brush your teeth?"
ah, thanks for that.
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I try to make these characters as unique and interesting as possible, so I'm glad you think so!
Thanks for checking out my story. I'm still reading yours, I honestly love it. Have you received your review? It's showing that the review was successful, yet I don't see it on my page. Tell me if you see it or not, I swear I made like fifteen reviews.