Review Detail of therealSkywolf202 in Nonn

Item: Nonn
Rating: 4.8

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therealSkywolf202Lv23yrtherealSkywolf202

I enjoyed reading your story so far. There are some grammar mistakes that can be easily fixed. One of my problems is that the chapters are a bit too long and the story moves a bit too slow. But I like the way you put the characters across and it was great.

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Dara_Manuel

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Dara_ManuelAuthorDara_Manuel

Will sure try to work on that, it seems to be my major issue making the chapters long and the story to slow how do I manage to prevent that?

3yr