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Not gonna lie but this story is amazing! The details written in and the plot is so interesting that it definitely gets a reader hooked i swear! Another thing to mention is the main character. I mean how can't I say that she is extremely likable? I'm really rooting for her! Overall, the book is one of its finest so please write on!
Wow. I mean like ur story is so breath-taking for me. I really am fascinated and intrigued by the main character and the amazing plot. It makes one curious about what will happen next! Apart from this, the grammar and punctuation are spot on as well! Do keep on writing!
Such an addicting story i swear! Everything is spot on with the main character , for me, being loveable and fun as well as the concept of the story is so exciting! I like the story development too and the plot is so well-described and fascinating. I'm as curious as ever to find out what will happen next! :D
I'll be honest here, this story is way more interesting than i thought it would be. I feel quite curious about the main character Zane and what's he up to. The plot really makes one want to know more! This book is definitely a keeper! I hope for you to write more as I will be waiting!
Yay! This is a thriller book and I'm ADDICTED to that genre! The synopsis is written so plainly by the character that it almost makes me wanna laugh at it! I also adore the plot a- and of course the main character who does seem the most interesting. I wonder what's he gonna do next? Keep on writing!
I gotta tell ya, this book is pretty interesting. I really want to find out more about the character and the world you describe is no doubt quite fascinating. I like the way you write especially according to this sorta genre - which i like! Can't wait for more! :D
its going nice so far. I really find it interesting, and hope you carry on! The characters are making me feel quite curious about them too. I like the plot and the way you write draws a reader well! Keep on writing!
Awesome story to be honest! The plot i so interesting and quite breath taking. I like the way you write, it really intrigues the reader as it really captures the background for ones imagination! I like the main characters as well, and the descriptions are very well-written!
Only two chapters and yet one can still tell how much thought has been put in this story. The plot is suspenseful and nail-biting! I personally am addicted to this thriller and mystery genre so I'm no doubt addicted. The main character really draws me towards the background as well! I hope you publish more chapters soon!
This sorta genre ha always been my favorite and your book clearly shows that you put alot of thought in it. It's mysterious and suspenseful for me, and quite interesting and did a i mention that the characters, really like? Only read like a few chapters but i will continue reading!
Ohhh this story is going real goood! The plot is amazing and it really intrigues a reader. The main character really makes me curious about the whole story, to be honest. The fact that the story is already completed makes me excited since i can now read it whenever i want without waiting that much! And for me, twenty six chapters are all i need. I'll keep on reading. Your writing style also impresses me alot because the way you describe everything really puts a good image in one's head :D!
Honestly, the plot is so interesting. I was hooked reading all the chapters and didn't even get bored or confused through out. The way you write and describe things really is impressive and the main character is definitely likeable for me. I hope you keep on writing! :D
This story is just so bloody thrilling! In every turn, you'll find yourself rooting for the main character - who i kinda feel sorry for. I've just read the first chapters, so I'm excited to find out how the main character will find the circus and all! Keep on writing! And I hope this book is filled with moe horrors to excite me! :D
I've always had a thing for apocalyptical genres and after reading the first few chapters, I'm getting quite addicted! The plot is intriguing and it makes me very curious about the main character and the trouble he'll have to face ahead! Keep on going!
The story is like going amazing so far. It's well-thought, i can tell because of the way you described in detail, making the background imaginable. The characters make me really curious, to be honest and I'm really drawn towards what will happen next! Keep it up! :D
Well, like i said, it's readable. There're only a few mistakes, like places where u should a comma or full-stop. Some typos. But everything's ok no need to worry that much [img=recommend]
Very different than I've ever read... And I gotta tell ya, I'm hooked! So the characters - especially the main one - are very well-written. You describe them perfectly! I mean, even the background setting has been given the smallest of details. I really like it, so count me as a fan
The story is quite intriguing with the plot being the one the draws you. Although a few mistakes, it's readable so I wouldn't emphasize on it that much. The characters are interesting to know about as well. So overall, i think ur story has potential!
Wow...this just keeps on getting better and better. I really like the main characters and I have a feeling things aren't gonna be easy in this story, which makes me want to read more! Best of all, there are plenty of chapters to keep one satisfied.
The story is going crazy interesting so far. I gotta admit I'm quite curious about the main character and how things are going to end up. A few grammar mistakes - but that can happen to anyone. I definitely see potential in it and a very intriguing fantasy. Keep it up!