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I am at chapter 5 and so far the story I read is really interesting. The plot is very well developing and the world set up in extremely well detailed. Other than very minor mistakes here and there, overall the quality is perfect and really shows that the author has paid attention to every detail. Also, efforts can be seen taken by the author to make it easy to read yet interesting. The fight scenes are very well written and i am loving this novel so far. Good work author. Well done. :)
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Well her character needs to be portrayed that. previously she wasn't aware of her true identity so she was ignorant. later on her character gets strong. This is first volume Love Arc. Soon you will have Survival Arc where you will see her getting stronger. Stay tuned. .. Thanks for reading and please leave a review if you like this story.
I observed that you too have the habit of adding elli**is instead of fullstop..
can we write sentences instead?
Consider this as an early review to show support to the dear author. Its just 3 chapters yet but the writing style is wonderful and the grammar is perfect as well. The author has created an interesting world and characters. This is the type of story where once you read it, you will look forward to every chapter. At the moment I rate it as 4./5. Waiting for the story to unfold.
Wonderful plot. Historical romance described in the Egyptian setup. NICE... Brewing romance in the middle of misunderstanding, very interesting. Overall Review: Very interesting story, the characters are well built and the plot isn't rushed. You can just imagine the story in your head as you read the words and images will unfold with the description... anyways that's what happens for me when I read a good book ;) just like a movie! Suggestion: Few paragraphs are too long so you can break them into smaller ones for better readability. Kudos. :)
Woah... Let me first breathe... The synopsis.. lol I was surprised with the killer synopsis. Now let's move to story. It is very well written but yeah a bit proofreading will make it flawless. Also, the world setting is very nice and the flow of the story is constant. Loved the way the characters are designed. It's really my type of genre so waiting for new chapters eagerly. Keep posting. :)