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deepu_2mthCommentedCh 520 The Truth Is More Complicated Than You Think- deepu_2mthCommentedCh 1 An internship
- deepu_2mthCommentedCh 1440 Another Year has Passed (1)
detailThe Most Loving Marriage In History: Master Mu’s Pampered WifeContemporary Romance · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin - deepu_2mthReplied to Tlim
may or not may be. .because she is still lingering with the past thoughts and she also thinks her mother and grandmother were never wrong.. if she changes this perspective of thinking she may reconcile with han yifeng
Ch 1440 Another Year has Passed (1)detailThe Most Loving Marriage In History: Master Mu’s Pampered WifeContemporary Romance · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin - deepu_2mthCommentedCh 493 Was It Not Intense Enough Just Now?
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First of all no need to mention disclaimer in every chapter just mention it in the synopsis which will help you gain more readers.. The story has a good potential, I am kind of afraid with blood and violence but so far you did a great job author. Just check your grammar mistakes. Proof read it before publishing.
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spaces recommended after commas and fullstops
That was when I realized there was the xxx supermarket behind them,at first I thought of nothing of it,but I saw a bit of blur on the thing beside it,I saw xxx restaurant beside them.A few blocks in front of my house there was the same supermarket and restaurant beside it.My heart raced with excitement thinking they might have come inside my city to visit me.I took my coat,my slippers,locked the door and ran hurriedly to the front of the supermarket,but to my distain they weren't their or were they? - deepu_2mthCommented
self boosting 😁😁
Luckily my class was in the afternoon,imagine if it was in the morning wouldn't wanna skip on a class on my second day.Anyways,Chucky explained to me that when carrying me yesterday I had fainted right in front of his door,so he carried me inside and changed my clothes since I as practically sweating like crazy,hearing this phrase made me blush a bit.He UNDRESSED ME,I mean I had a lot of experience but….thinking he undressed me made me feel some sort of way and made me have lustful desires for him.I thanked him for taking care of me and he gave me pills to put in my pocket just in case I forgot to bring my pills in case of another panic attack.Chucky gave me a ride back home as it was pretty far from his place.With this we said our goodbyes,but to show my gratefulness for him I asked him out for coffee and he accepted.What can I say?I'm worldwide handsome and nobody would reject my offer. - deepu_2mthCommented
after full stop, space is recommended
"Where am I?" I had just woken up and my head was still dizzy,but at least it felt better,I noticed that I was NAKED?"WHAT UH FUCK WHAT DID I DO"I panicked and thought to myself.I was more confused as why there was no one here.Wait where am I?I lifted myself out from the bed and started exploring the house.After travelling the house I was tired.The house I was in was probably the biggest one and most expensive one i've been in,it's floors was decorated in marble,the ceiling was high and pretty fucking classy,the house also had tons of rooms like 10.I decided not to enter any of them since I gotta respect the owner's privacy,oh yeah and there was a swimming pool too.A FUCKING SWIMMING POOL.I was so jealous that i wanted to destroy the house but luckily I didn't. - deepu_2mthCommented
not needed in every chapter. you can mention in the synopsis, just a suggestion
(this book is intended for a more mature audience as it includes many trigger warnings such as murder, dismembering of parts,gore and etc if the audience does not feel comfortable with any of the topics i recommend you to exit this book,the gore will start at chapter 6 though) - deepu_2mthCommented
my is not required
"Score", I thought in my head, I finally got his number and seduced him. With this we said goodbye to each other and I went into my class with a smile in my face and positive thoughts in my head.That was until I saw my an old sex partner of mine in the corner of the room, I started panicking and sat down. I pretended to not see him. Fortunately for me I don't think he saw me. - deepu_2mthCommented
I think it is criminal psychology.. psychology and criminology doesn't sound good
A bright spring day, cherry blossoms blooming everywhere and my very first day to college. I'm Noah Cameron, a 21 year old attending Rosy Blooms College, one of the most prestigious colleges in the whole world, I major in both psychology and criminology.The reason behind these two majors are simple. I want to learn more about how criminal's minds act, how they think and what choices they choose, making society call them "outcasts". - deepu_2mthPosted
- deepu_2mthCommentedCh 9 The dead Prince is alive
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thus is the reason I will never sympathize with you.. what a selfish woman
"I don't have any sister! My mother, Doris, was of noble birth and she only had one daughter—me, Gu Lingsha! I have nothing to do with Mu Lingshi! Who's her sister? Impossible! She's an illegitimate daughter!" Gu Lingsha retorted when Morrison said that.detailThe Most Loving Marriage In History: Master Mu’s Pampered WifeContemporary Romance · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin - deepu_3mthReplied to Piu30
u may right about it but I don't feel pity on her.. She is prideful and can go upto any extent to hurt others
Ch 1399 Not Important Anymore (2)detailThe Most Loving Marriage In History: Master Mu’s Pampered WifeContemporary Romance · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin - deepu_3mthCommented
what a dutiful brother
"You have to understand how important the first time can be for a girl." Nian Junting continued with, "I don't want her to get hurt again. Of course, if you two end up getting married, I'll be very happy for you. But since you just got together, you need to control yourself. To be honest, I'm saying this to you because I don't know you well. As her brother, I'm worried about her." - deepu_3mthCommented
xiaye you proved time and time again that only you can mu yuchen happy
Smiling happily, she tiptoed and gave him a peck on his face. "Go ahead. Just call me later."detailThe Most Loving Marriage In History: Master Mu’s Pampered WifeContemporary Romance · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin - deepu_3mthCommented
god! you are such a stupid getting manipulated by an idiot
Although she finally found out what happened and realized that the change she was going through was because of Doris, she still could not bring herself to resent her mother. She just felt sorry for herself and thought that fate was unfair. Why did she need to go through so many ups and downs? Why could she not be happy like Xi Xiaye, Zhuang Shurong, and the other women?detailThe Most Loving Marriage In History: Master Mu’s Pampered WifeContemporary Romance · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin - deepu_3mthCommented
prideful and unfathomable qi feng.. seriously I can't stop laughing at these words
She had forgotten that someone as prideful and unfathomable like Qi Feng would never bring up all these unhappy things to her. Even if she had been by his side for many years, this was her first time hearing him bring up his mother and all the unhappy past.detailThe Most Loving Marriage In History: Master Mu’s Pampered WifeContemporary Romance · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin
