Review Detail of iam_adh in Nonn

When I read the synopsis I thought this piece was already at an interesting point. When I read the first chapter, I had already fallen in love with the characters and the author's writing style. However, there are some grammatical issues and I've noticed how some sentences do not start off with a capital letter. I like the characters, I do enjoy their personalities, but I feel as if they could be more fleshed out. Although there are twenty-two chapters as of right now, I'm still not clear with the world background. I believe the pacing of the story is a tad bit bumpy, but I still like the story. Despite those problems, this story is interesting and I would love to see more come from it. I will add this to my library when more chapters are released.