At the beginning it was a bit slow but as I kept reading it got better. The characters are well developed. It's not really what I would enjoy to read but I definitely enjoyed your novel. Keep it up

I love all your details, it just makes reading the novel even better. You presented the characters very well and it isn't moving too fast, the pace is just right. I look forward to reading more of your chapters.

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I love the first chapter. The flashback is so real. There are some mistakes that can be easily fixed. I want to see how these characters develop overtime. I hope you keep going. Well done!

Love this chapter. A few grammatical errors but that's okay. Well done!

I love this. The way everything is presented is just amazing. You continue to amaze me again.

thanks for the honesty. I'll work on it for future reference

I loved the first chapter. The suspense builds up really nicely. There is a very creepy tone and mood and I love that. A few grammatical errors here and there but there's always a place for improvement. Keep it up, author!

Hey, your story is very interesting. The characters are well presented and developed before the actual plot is revealed. I'm hoping to see a lot of action and I would like to see where this book goes. Keep it up, author!

I love this story. I feel sorry for Jonah and his sister, they've gone through so much. This book is absolutely great and the way everything unfolds itself is amazing. Keep going, author.

Added to my collection. I think this story could be really interesting and I'm looking forwards to reading more of the planned chapter that you have. Keep it up, Neil. I hope you have a great experience and a fun time writing this novel.

This story is great. I love the genre. I think it could have a lot of potential. I love the characters and their dialogue is great, not many people can make a dialogue interesting and you've done that. Keep it up, author.

This story is really good. It has so much creativity and imagination. It has a lot of potential. I really enjoyed reading this novel. Keep up with the good work. And also I'm putting this in my library:)

I loved this story. It was so creative and imaginative. Who knew crayfish would be such a good idea. Congratulations and keep going. I'm giving this a 5 star

So you can only read the prologue. And I think it's one of those prologues that aren't boring. You did a great job at that. It ended with a cliffhanger which will most likely attract reader. I wish you well on the competition.