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Shionokami

Shionokami

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Yahallo! I'm Shionokami and I love everything that has to do with Japanese culture! Want to talk or pose any questions? Then follow me on Instagram, my user name is: shionookami

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami2yr
    Replied to notsoommmot

    Hello, hello there, my friend! It is I...Shionokami! Here to answer your question! (4 months later...I'm so sorry about it!!!) First of all, it sure makes me happy to hear, that you enjoy the novel I'm writing =D Now, to answer your question, no, I haven't dropped it and currently, I don't plan on doing something like that either (unless something beyond my control, changes that) I've just been re-editing the chapters (from the very first to the most recent one, but I left a notice on the novel's summary) just to ret-con a few things and make the story, as a whole, better! But unfortunately, when I stared re-editing (which was around July or August, if my memory does not fail me) my computer had given up on life and so, I had to edit on my phone (which isn't my favorite type of device to do such a thing) there were also a few other things, but I won't go into details... However, now I have a new computer and I have been working on this re-editing, once again! But you'll have to be patient, since there's still a lot of things to finish up (and I do advice you to re-read it all again, once it's done! The chapters will be bigger and there will be a lot of new events happening!) but then again, I'll be providing a small note, with all changes! And I think this pretty much covers it up! It will take some time to finish up, so please little bit of patience and once again, I'm sorry for the (extremely) late reply!

    Ch 77 Chapter 77 What will everyone think of us? Part 1
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami2yr
    Replied to dokthor_shishigami

    Thanks! =) I'm already feeling a lot better, but I still can't play any games, so that will have to wait for now XD

    Ch 75 Chapter 75 I want you to have fun, lot's of it!
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami2yr
    Replied to ImmortalDragonArch

    Well, I never said that they were in Japan, now did I? XD But well, maybe I should have said where they were, right from the begining. Yeah, I kinda goofed up... I'm sorry about this one.

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to Wolfgirl1215

    Thanks ^^ I'm happy that you liked it!

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Posted

    I don't usually read a lot of stories about vampires, but from the few I have read (this one included) I have to admit that this one has been the best of them all! With that said, onto the review proper, first the characters, their just *chef's kiss* perfect! They have all personalities and all of them feel different and unique, something you don't see too often, too be honest and that is always welcome! Secondly I can't talk about the characters without talking about the extremely beautiful and well done writing! I was honestly, blown away by the way everything is discribed and especially by how artistacly everything is described! All in all, loved the characters and loved the beautiful writing style that pull you in almost instantly, the moment you start the first chapter! Definitely gonna keep an eye on this one, that's for sure!

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to GhostBlade_2357

    A bit hard to point them out, so I advice you to use the grammarly website, you can go there and make an account, then copy and paste the chapter there and it will tell you the mistakes you made, it's pretty easy to use too ^^

    Ch 44 Chapter 44 Too close
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to GhostBlade_2357

    I already gave it a look It's pretty good, so far ^^ There's a few mistakes here and there, but it's not that bad and you can change it later on and you should try edit it a bit, so it flows a little bit better ^^ But as I said, take your time with it and keep up the good work!

    Ch 44 Chapter 44 Too close
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to GhostBlade_2357

    Good ^^ Can't wait to hava a look =)

    Ch 44 Chapter 44 Too close
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to GhostBlade_2357

    Kind of hard to explain, but most of the names I come up with for the charaters, have to either sound good, when I say them out loud and I also have to like the meaning behind them and I think that pretty much covers it, when it comes to the way I come up/choose names ^^

    Ch 47 Chapter 47 How I feel
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to GhostBlade_2357

    I see, I see good luck with it, my friend ^^ And if you need help feel free to ask =)

    Ch 44 Chapter 44 Too close
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to GhostBlade_2357

    How did I create the cover? Well, first I looked for a image that I thing would look good as a cover, then I used an only editing website to put the title of the story on it. The editing website is called, online image editor and it's pretty simple to use. If you don't mind can you tell me why you asked? Have good day! =)

    Ch 44 Chapter 44 Too close
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to ErjasD

    I see and I uderstand that it's frustaiting to have a dense Mc (it pains me to make him like this too) but as I told you in the comments section of chapter 62, there's a reason as to why he acts like this, to understand a little bit better, read chapter 59 again and see the things he says and thinks, he has a reason to be oblivious to the girls feelings and it's something that will be explored later on. And like I said, it's a bit frustating to have a Mc like this, but things have to go slowly as of now, for the romance later on. Or if you want, you can follow me on twitter and we can talk better there about this, if you want...

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to ErjasD

    Sorry if this might sound like an excuse, but for now, he has to be a little bit dense and he has reasons for being like that. I won't deny that is a little bit too much dense, but without going to much into spoiler territory his past is one of the reasons he's like this. I understand that this is frustrating, but it won't take long until things change.

    Ch 62 Chapter 62 I'll make it up to you!
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Posted

    I'm a sucker for romance stories and despite the way I feel after reading these type of stories that are roller-coasters of emotions (which this one is) I can't stop reading them and this one is all of the things that make me like romance stories. The storyline and characters are very well done, described and introduced, and speaking a bit more about the characters, they're just *chefs kiss* perfect as I said they are well written and have a lot of character, especially Beth, she deserves the crown! Now as for the writing...it's pretty good and I like it a lot! No mistakes whatsoever that I took notice off! All in all, it's a good story and one that I will definitely be coming back to!

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Posted

    Now this is what I call a good story, especially when there's wolfs in it, it's a instant win for me. Now, I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but I can already tell that we have something good here. The review proper, the world and the setting are all pretty good and very well made and everything is well explained. As for the character they are all well written and have a lot of, well, character. As for the writing it's pretty good with no grammatical errors I took notice off (perhaps because I was having way too much fun with it XD) All in all, it's a good and well written story that is worth your time!

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    Weak to Strong : The Hybrid
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Posted

    Well then, I don't usually read system stories since most of them tend to be, in all honesty, the same thing all the time in every story that uses this, and sometimes the system used is well...not good or it's not used that well by the characters. But that is not the case with this story right here, where the system is used pretty well and makes sense, which is good and in my opinion this is how most of the system novels should be. But let's start with the review proper, first off the world, it's pretty good and suck you right in with everything that happens and makes you want more. As for the characters, they are all pretty good and as of now pretty well written I have no complaints with any of them. Now the writing, it's pretty good there's a few grammatical errors here and there but I won't shame the author as we all make mistakes and it's not something unfixable All in all, pretty good story and I will be coming back for more P.S: if this sounds to vague it's in purpose since I want everyone that reads this review to read the story

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    HAPPY EVER AFTER
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to Yashineoneechan

    It makes me happy that you like her so much XD

    Ch 65 Chapter 65 Tension in the Tenko Tower
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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to Thesoultaker88

    Well hello there, to answer your questions 1) there won't be any drama between the harem members 2) the harem will be quite big but as for now I can't say how many XD As for r18 stuff...we'll see about that XD Hope to hear from you again! And enjoy! =)

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to Kindread4440

    Thanks! I'm happy that you liked it =)

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  • Shionokami
    Shionokami3yr
    Replied to GhostBlade_2357

    I see, I see, that's a good idea! But as of now the mc still has to learn what his power, is all about, before we can dive into the training in which he will be able to control his powers better (cast spells faster, learn how to use other abilities, etc.) So the only thing I can ask, is to be a bit more pacient in this department for now =)

    Ch 29 Chapter 29 Surprise part 2
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