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EldritchTheDead

EldritchTheDead

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2019-11-25 JoinedUnited States
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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead2mth
    Replied to NotBeatrix

    Thank you. I tried my best on the first chapter 馃槄

    Every step I took and every face I saw that took sight of us was filled with disgust or fear. I've never seen horrible expressions in my entire life, my thoughts jumbled inside my head as I thought "What have I done?".
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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead2mth
    Replied to NotBeatrix

    Thank you.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead2mth
    Replied to NotBeatrix

    Thank you, I keep trying to improve since I鈥檓 a beginner.

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  • EldritchTheDead
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    Posted

    A well-written story with unique characters that make the story interesting. No problems whatsoever and the dynamic between the two main characters make it all worthwhile. I may not be a fan of this genre but would recommend to any type of reader out there.

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    Help My Butler is the Devil!
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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Posted

    This is an interesting story, the first chapter will leave you asking for more. Although, cliche in a sense that it鈥檚 a demon story all over again but it鈥檚 reedeming quality is the story. Also, add the good writing, well-written scenarios and interesting plot. This is a well thought out story that can make you craving for more. Would recommend to any reader out there.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to Kotachua

    Thank you. I hope you鈥檒l keep reading.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to EldritchTheDead

    Your welcome.

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Posted

    Interesting story, its a mixture of sci-fi with fantasy based elements. Well written and i have not seen any grammatical errors so far. Good number of released chapters per week. Definitely worth the read as overtime the world background fleshes out each chapter. Would recommend to any reader out there.

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    The Dawn of Heroes
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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Posted

    The first chapter is a great hook. It can grab the attention of any reader out there with minimal effort, using a thrilling and mysterious effect. No grammar problems, updates three times a week, and has an interesting story. What more could a reader ask for? Would recommend to anyone out there! Keep writing author!

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    Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws
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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to GRITTY_HUE

    Thank you. I feel honored. I hope you鈥檒l keep reading.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to iam_adh

    Thank you. What you said is very flattering. I hope you鈥檒l keep reading.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to Scarlettheartt

    Your welcome.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Posted

    Well, an interesting idea for the same old vampire story. The plot is definitely well thought out and is eye-catching. Although has minor problems with grammar, its not a problem whatsoever. Good job author, hoping for more from the story. Keep writing!

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Posted

    The story is not bad, i like the very manga-like dialogues and plot. It鈥檚 cute and interesting in it own way. Its a refreshing take on the whole romantic dtory thing because the usual stories I鈥檝e read in this category are too dramatic and serious. Overall the story is pretty good, minimal grammatical errors. Keep up the good work author.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Commented

    Why does 鈥測ahallo鈥 seem familliar?

    Yahallo: Ohh, RimiRin is active again... ~guuevening~ RimiRin...
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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to Scarlettheartt

    Thank you for the honest input. I'll make sure to put your ideas into account. I hope you'll keep reading.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to Sun23

    Thank you for the meaningful review since this is only my second time writing I still have a hard time making sure with the details of the scenarios, thus making them inefficient, but I hope you'll keep reading future chapters because it gets better; Story-wise and grammar-wise. I've not considered for reading through pc platform, but I'll fix this issue to suit it better on pc. I will give them respectable descriptions in further chapters. I've actually planned to give them their own chapters to give better detail.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to RJMidnight

    Thank you, I try to fix the problems as best as I can and improve further as I delve deeper into the story. I hope you'll keep reading.

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  • EldritchTheDead
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    Replied to spicyscribbles

    It was thoughtless, but what would you do if someone you love was in the same situation.

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  • EldritchTheDead
    EldritchTheDead3mth
    Replied to Nikkie_LZ

    Watch your head, you might bang it even more on the next chapters.

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