Thank you. I tried my best on the first chapter 😅
A well-written story with unique characters that make the story interesting. No problems whatsoever and the dynamic between the two main characters make it all worthwhile. I may not be a fan of this genre but would recommend to any type of reader out there.
This is an interesting story, the first chapter will leave you asking for more. Although, cliche in a sense that it’s a demon story all over again but it’s reedeming quality is the story. Also, add the good writing, well-written scenarios and interesting plot. This is a well thought out story that can make you craving for more. Would recommend to any reader out there.
Interesting story, its a mixture of sci-fi with fantasy based elements. Well written and i have not seen any grammatical errors so far. Good number of released chapters per week. Definitely worth the read as overtime the world background fleshes out each chapter. Would recommend to any reader out there.
The first chapter is a great hook. It can grab the attention of any reader out there with minimal effort, using a thrilling and mysterious effect. No grammar problems, updates three times a week, and has an interesting story. What more could a reader ask for? Would recommend to anyone out there! Keep writing author!
Well, an interesting idea for the same old vampire story. The plot is definitely well thought out and is eye-catching. Although has minor problems with grammar, its not a problem whatsoever. Good job author, hoping for more from the story. Keep writing!
The story is not bad, i like the very manga-like dialogues and plot. It’s cute and interesting in it own way. Its a refreshing take on the whole romantic dtory thing because the usual stories I’ve read in this category are too dramatic and serious. Overall the story is pretty good, minimal grammatical errors. Keep up the good work author.
Why does “yahallo” seem familliar?
Thank you for the honest input. I'll make sure to put your ideas into account. I hope you'll keep reading.
Thank you for the meaningful review since this is only my second time writing I still have a hard time making sure with the details of the scenarios, thus making them inefficient, but I hope you'll keep reading future chapters because it gets better; Story-wise and grammar-wise. I've not considered for reading through pc platform, but I'll fix this issue to suit it better on pc. I will give them respectable descriptions in further chapters. I've actually planned to give them their own chapters to give better detail.
Thank you, I try to fix the problems as best as I can and improve further as I delve deeper into the story. I hope you'll keep reading.
It was thoughtless, but what would you do if someone you love was in the same situation.