Review Detail of mona_keshwari in Nonn

hey dear, first of all interesting synopsis... loved the twins interaction and hated james girlfriend mia, she is such a... your story building is good, with nice interpretation, and lastly... Your story needs lot more exposure than this, I think dear,you need to add tags so that many audience will read, your story has humour then add comedy, that placenta joke all , it fits the bill, add tragic past, doting siblings, love, angst, everything u remember, it will get exposure...uy could add up to 10 tags... keep up the good work, [img=update]