Yes, I have a plan for a long-term relationship! As for party members, he is still gathering them, each at a time! Hope you enjoy you read. <3
Romance, not yet, but MC is dealing with his sexual desires with one night stands like every human being. So, don't worry, he knows how to get laid and talk to a woman instead of being a dense MC with 13 years old mentality.
Thank you for the review and the support! <3 I will keep trying my best to make the quality keep going up and only up!
1) Bro 89 chapters, 160k words, 16h of reading continuously to finish. That's not a free sample to let you know whether the book was good, or is it for you or not. Readers decide whether they liked the novel around chapter 10 and if they are willing to continue reading or not. If you managed to read up to 89 chapters and was still indecisive about the novel, I have nothing to add to that. 2) You keep writing that I shouldn't have spent an entire volume on hotel development. The volume size was 30 chapters. Remove 12 chapters, that are on world-building, and totally unrelated matters to the hotel. You get 18 chapters for hotel developments that only due to it, that Felix managed to get the AP Bracelet, which in turn helped speed up the plot. Was that still too much? That's an amount of a mini ark in most novels. For getting an AP bracelet prize that early in the planet, It was perfect for it. 3) Unless you read the three games that I wrote and see how the formats are actually played out instead of imagining them on your mind, I won't be arguing with you on this point. 4) this is not your typical novel, where one desperate for death can just scream due to emotions and suddenly break-through to the next stage automatically. I keep stressing out that Maria was a prodigy and a genius for coming up with a unique way of breaking the bloodline shackles. When I said the genius, I didn't mean by being a young child with comprehension or such you see in cultivation novels. I meant with it that she had an extremely high IQ. You should have figured it out by yourself after understanding that my novel cultivation system doesn't rely on comprehension or such. In addition, I didn't type the method she used as that is going to be a spoiler and I am planning on showing when Felix tries to etch an ability. When you see the uniqueness, you will understand why she was respected. 5) I am not going to rush the novel and ruin the storyline just to reduce some chapters and make the first game accessible earlier, and I am not going to delay locking premium from 60 chapters when I received the contract to 103 (around the first game ends). Even if I accept it, my content editor won't. If you read up to the locked chapters, spending 16h of your life on my novel, and still hesitate to even use free passes to read the first game, which was just ten chapters (10 free passes), then please don't pinpoint that problem on me or call me a scammer. I am not trying to scam any one of their money, and If I was writing mostly for money and your coins, I would have locked at 60 chapters instantly without consideration. And the readers who loved what they read would still be unlocking chapters from 60 without making a single complaint. Yet, when I try to act generously with my readers and try my best to bring them as close as possible to the first game without paying a single cent, I get called a scammer. Thank you for the feedback and I will be closing this argument. Have a nice day and best of luck in your future reads.
They replace them with the abilities of the next beast, that why it's called the realm of replacement. However, they could etch one ability of their own choice from the previous bloodline in their 1% human bloodline.
1) Most authors are recommended to lock their chapters in volume two that would be around 40 chapters to 60 chapters. I had the contract and decision in my hand way before that and still delayed to lock chapters until chapter 89. I thought I wouldn't be hearing complaints about it since most novels have premium active at 40 to 60 but I guess not. 2) The first volume was a mix of hotel development and world-building to not bore the readers. I didn't want to keep putting info dumps in 8 chapters on a row just to get rid of it. That's a horrible thing to do and will kill the novel before it even began. PLUS, the only reason Felix obtained the AP bracelet earlier than everyone was due to this extensive Hotel Development, so stop ranting out of context, please. If it wasn't for the AP bracelet, Felix wouldn't be able to enter UVR so soon and instead of reading about it, you will reading about Felix spending 6 months in the camp to secure the AP bracelet as the last reward of the battles. 3) I thought of it long before making the decision of choosing the games randomly. But what you never mentioned was the fact that the MC was preferring battle format. If I let the players choose what kind of format they wanted, the MC would be choosing only battle format games, ignoring the rest. It was only a logical decision. However! This meant all of the game about the MC WIll about battle formats, then what's the point of having other formats if I will be forced to just write about one format? In the end of the day, web novels are for entertainment and the readers want to read about other games and see the MC in races, sports, puzzles, and such. Not just battle format, battle format, battle format. This sense of randomness and mystery is also good as the readers will never know what kind of format or game he will be placed in. 4) I explicitly wrote over and over and over again that the 1% human bloodline shouldn't be touched or have anything to do with beasts' bloodline as that is everything to a human. Messing with it will only have one end, and that was turning into the same beast for a short period before melting or exploding. This was of course going to keep most humans away! In what world do you live in for someone to tell you that if you put ur hand in a fire you will be burned, but you will go for it just to see for yourself??! Mariana was fearless and genius for successfully etching one ability in her 1% bloodline without getting killed in the process. I said she is genius because the process that she used was smart. I have yet to show the process of etching an ability since I wanted to show it on the MC, not just dump it with the rest of the information. In the end chapter 7 was just to give an overview on the human bloodline system, and I keep writing and writing in notes that it is not explained on its entirely and I don't want to overwhelm the readers with everything at once. If I probably went I did you will be ranting about it as well. 5) The novel is called supremacy games, so you should at least read one game and come back for another review that is about the games. Feedback is always appreciated. <3
First The elemental potion isn’t popular, as only the top in the humans rwce pyrmide can afford to increase the the affinity rating from 1% to an affinity that is well enough to start integrating. I believe that when you saw Witch Hala’s long costumer Queue, you thought that all customers wanted to concoct the elemental potion. But that’s False as the queue was for all of madam Hala’s potions. (I wrote like two or three next to elemental potion before) 2) The reason The potion drinker unlocks only 1% of the element is because that’s what the potion is able to unlock. (Spoiler there are better versions and ways to unlock the elements)
Let me put it this way. Abilities that require elemental energy are actives, and others that don't require it are passives. Morphing abilities reduce elemental energy each second they are active.
gym ball is the one used for workouts. The beach ball is that big one that has seven colors and inflatable.