Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Deleted my 5 star review which was at 5-6 chapter, idk. But the premise of the story is one of the best, heck this has the best hyuuga idea out of all ff i have read. But the execution, oh my god, it's so bad, so many plot holes. He should add more tags like, brainless mc, overpowered mc, forced plot, etc. So people like me can escape it. But 5/5 stars for stability of updates

Blind character in naruto is an interesting idea but author collected all cliches from chinese MS stories and dumped it right from the start. MC feels like cardboard(and of course everyone wiil praise him as an geniues, exept his chinese style enemies )

I trust this author but for gods sake pleasee focus on 1 story at a time. You havent even completed your other 2😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

A big fat nonsense, descriptions, plot, MC, all of it.

Forced plot but still a fun read if you turn off your brain as the author lacks some basic knowledge of the Naruto series so you may need to just say F it and accept what's happening.

This work was pretty cool until chapter 15, from then on I felt a headache just looking at it. The protagonist does unnecessary things and as if he wants people not to like him worst of all and the system asking him to get 10 pairs of sharingan in the uchiha massacre and he just entered the academy... Even so he goes out killing a root ninja like if it was nothing.

why do cool ff concepts often tend to flop due to horrible execution? My main issue is with the MC. The guy rips his byakugon eyes out due to not wanting to be controlled by the hyuga. What if he didn't receive a system? what then? he'd be blind in a ninja village he knows will be attacked almost destroyed multiple times in the span of a few years. why not let the system come to him first and require him to blind himself to gain access to it? Cool concept, wasted potential.

The author is destroying his own novel by this forced ino romance non sense. This is why the rating is significantly dropped. It's not too late to fix this problems.

The romance is really forced, it became very cringe I mean ino? Please🤣 ..... This is why the ratings dropped,, I think you should consider love interest......

It's such a pity that from being one of the top best Naruto stories, it turned into just another mediocre one. It had so much potential, the main character could have developed really well, but there was too much drama, nerfing, fillers, inconsistencies, and other issues. This story was the best in my opinion, with a new and interesting theme. But as the saying goes, 'the higher they rise, the harder they fall.' Unfortunately, this story fell and couldn't rise again. I wish everyone good luck. Goodbye, and until we meet again.

The MC has Fujitora's powers but not the temperament for which he is well-liked, what's the point if it doesn't honour the character? The story is getting worse with every chapter.

Man, this was actually kinda good at the start, but the quality took a sharp drop when the author decided to have the MC return to Konoha. It was so poorly done and the clearly author couldn't think of a way to do so more naturally, because he had the MC randomly get attacked by the Pein. Sure, the MC could've just run away at any time, but now he's suddenly "too prideful" to retreat from an obviously superior opponent. (He ends up running away anyway.) Konoha is happy to take him back and treat his (near fatal) injuries and let him wander around the village, despite his murder of several village higher ups and Hyuga clan members. After all, he has information on the Akatsuki for them. Sure Konoha could just have him tortured or something, but, uh, reasons. And then the romance with Ino starts escalating, and I dropped the fic.

My God is the MC dumb... When you give a character a disability it means that he won't be overpowered, you make him struggle and have the fights balanced and flow easy. But no, there is little of that; afterall overpowered MCs are easy to write cause they are easy, even if the author is horrible at executing a good one. The plot holes are making me jump off a cliff. All in all, a story that could've been special, but the author wasn't up to it.

nope... just nope.The start was good and I had hopes. You had to ruin the story by nerfing the MC and prolong the fights for 30-40 Chapters... Write a Dragon Ball fanfic where you can write 100 Chapter fighting scene however you like but in Ninja World where everything is about finishing it as fast as possible? No, just no.

I just can't read this any further. I dropped at like chapter 6 or whatever the number was but... it is just ridiculous. Chakra refining, the objective incorrect descriptions said by other characters, and the Chinese vibe kills it for me. One example would be calling a kid smart for gouging his eyes out. It doesn't add up

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It started out a 5 out of 5. MC quickly unleashed his inner emo sasuke arc and it immediately fell. I hope he can recover and start acting like a functioning human being or I might have to drop it.

The story became ridiculous very quickly, it's just the typical Chinese story of the protagonist who believes he owns the absolute truth and is just a mascot of the system.

the author has almost no knowledge of Naruto, the mc becomes another emo sasuke and there are many forced Chinese novel type plots If you are a big Naruto fan or don't like Chinese clichés or a dog who loves the system, this is not your story.

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