Item: Naruto: Blind Hyuga
Rating: 5
Author: Professor_Light

Professor_LightLv41yr

2023-05-12 04:51

Every time an FF about a Hyuga mc, i always read about its from the main clan and even its from the branch clan the way to freedom is to either fuinjutsu or tenseigan. So i always ask to myself why just gouge your eyes or have it removed. And so i finall find one. Anyway i have just read about 5 chapters and also the other 2 novels of this author highly recommendable. So the story so for is that the mc's dad died at 7 years ago during the 9 tails attack and currently the mom just died. Lastly the time for birdcage seal is coming prompting to the mc's current state or i would like to say The Title State. Also did i say that he has Fujitora's Template. *Writing Quality - 4.5 There are some typos but tolerable enough *Updates - 5 seems like this one is getting updated every day currently but honestly i hope he sticks to one of the authors FF and Finish it *Story Development - 5 Just what i like and expect *Character Design - 5 Calm and Collected like Shishui after all he can also gauge his own eyes and the mc will probably became fujitora cause of the template *World Background - 5 Good we have the reaction of the hokage, elders civilian basically every of konoha of what happened to the mc. Hope to see more, here is some stones

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

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3.2

238 Chs

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TeraBaapHuMaiLv3

Deleted my 5 star review which was at 5-6 chapter, idk. But the premise of the story is one of the best, heck this has the best hyuuga idea out of all ff i have read. But the execution, oh my god, it's so bad, so many plot holes. He should add more tags like, brainless mc, overpowered mc, forced plot, etc. So people like me can escape it. But 5/5 stars for stability of updates

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DaoistPCowBDLv4

Blind character in naruto is an interesting idea but author collected all cliches from chinese MS stories and dumped it right from the start. MC feels like cardboard(and of course everyone wiil praise him as an geniues, exept his chinese style enemies )

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madtitanLv12

I trust this author but for gods sake pleasee focus on 1 story at a time. You havent even completed your other 2😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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DaoistH7599XLv4

A big fat nonsense, descriptions, plot, MC, all of it.

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AllSeeingBedroomLv4

Forced plot but still a fun read if you turn off your brain as the author lacks some basic knowledge of the Naruto series so you may need to just say F it and accept what's happening.

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Lucien7Lv12

This work was pretty cool until chapter 15, from then on I felt a headache just looking at it. The protagonist does unnecessary things and as if he wants people not to like him worst of all and the system asking him to get 10 pairs of sharingan in the uchiha massacre and he just entered the academy... Even so he goes out killing a root ninja like if it was nothing.

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bytter_sirupLv4

why do cool ff concepts often tend to flop due to horrible execution? My main issue is with the MC. The guy rips his byakugon eyes out due to not wanting to be controlled by the hyuga. What if he didn't receive a system? what then? he'd be blind in a ninja village he knows will be attacked almost destroyed multiple times in the span of a few years. why not let the system come to him first and require him to blind himself to gain access to it? Cool concept, wasted potential.

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Jeremy_Stone_1106Lv1

The author is destroying his own novel by this forced ino romance non sense. This is why the rating is significantly dropped. It's not too late to fix this problems.

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Jeremy_Stone_1106Lv1

The romance is really forced, it became very cringe I mean ino? Please🤣 ..... This is why the ratings dropped,, I think you should consider love interest......

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GuionistaLv1

It's such a pity that from being one of the top best Naruto stories, it turned into just another mediocre one. It had so much potential, the main character could have developed really well, but there was too much drama, nerfing, fillers, inconsistencies, and other issues. This story was the best in my opinion, with a new and interesting theme. But as the saying goes, 'the higher they rise, the harder they fall.' Unfortunately, this story fell and couldn't rise again. I wish everyone good luck. Goodbye, and until we meet again.

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