AllSeeingBedroom
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AllSeeingBedroom18 days agoReplied to BLACKchickenFREDO
- AllSeeingBedroom18 days agoPosted
Review up to chapter 60. Writing is one of the best in this site but the story itself is a masochist dream. The author likes putting the mc into dire situation to add drama and obstacles without any character growth from the mc. Its like after being transmigrated into the body of a 11 year old his mind and attitude also became one. There are some points that tries to make the scene deep with a few internal crisis but instead just makes it cringe and out of place. I hope it get better but from the other comments it may not.
- AllSeeingBedroom19 days agoCommented
at this point better just make the Mc a in world OC rather than a isekai trope.
- AllSeeingBedroom25 days agoCommented
- AllSeeingBedroom25 days agoReplied to Ennan
Neat picture of his Animagus form while also being a meme
- AllSeeingBedroom25 days agoCommented
that would be OP in certain situations
- AllSeeingBedrooma month agoCommented
prefer make the romance stuff an after thought and focus on world building
- AllSeeingBedrooma month agoReplied to JustTiredOfPicking
edging is different from ambiguous, vague, obscure, fuzzy, hazy, confusing, murky, indefinite, or, uncertain. But if you see it as edging then that's on you, enjoy your kinks my friend.
- AllSeeingBedrooma month agoCommented
Does the Mc know that this is a MarvelxHP world or not? If so when did he realize?