Guionista

Cine

Thanks for the chapter, but please try to avoid using so much artificial intelligence. As a long-time reader, I notice it immediately, and it's also evident in things like... (A clear example of AI is when it explains the characters' reactions, naming them one by one and their reaction; this happens at least three times in the text... another is the constant use of bold text when it's unnecessary, like when mentioning a character's name, and also how it adds so much drama to almost everything. I realized a while ago that it uses artificial intelligence, but it's becoming increasingly prevalent, and the fact that the chapters don't progress makes the story less interesting...) [Google Translate]

I never stopped to think about the bad luck that Krieg and his crew have, it's like you barely enter the Grand Line and find Kaido in dragon mode trying to immolate himself or Bigmon

The chapter is good, but the AI ​​is a bit overused.

The chapter is good, but the AI ​​is a bit overused.