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TeraBaapHuMai
TeraBaapHuMaiLv31yr
2023-06-05 19:51

Deleted my 5 star review which was at 5-6 chapter, idk. But the premise of the story is one of the best, heck this has the best hyuuga idea out of all ff i have read. But the execution, oh my god, it's so bad, so many plot holes. He should add more tags like, brainless mc, overpowered mc, forced plot, etc. So people like me can escape it. But 5/5 stars for stability of updates

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

also this

1yr
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Mamur
MamurLv3

Actually, there's something I've always wondered. Why wasn't MC castrated when he was kicked out of the clan? The Hyuga Clan are maniacs who will mark the entire clan with the seal of slavery to prevent their kekkei genkai from leaking out. The fact that he is blind does not change the fact that he is still a potential Byakugan factory, all Danzo needs is a dose of aphrodisiac and a hundred women. After 9 months, he can obtain up to an additional 50 pairs of Byakugan. Man, I don't think anybody's gonna forget this.

1yr
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hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

yea, my question exactly. Taking out the eyes does nothing if he got captured by another village or defect and used as a breeding mule. The most logical scenario would've been to neuter him or put a seal on him regarless since his action open up further dessention within the clan.

Mamur:Actually, there's something I've always wondered. Why wasn't MC castrated when he was kicked out of the clan? The Hyuga Clan are maniacs who will mark the entire clan with the seal of slavery to prevent their kekkei genkai from leaking out. The fact that he is blind does not change the fact that he is still a potential Byakugan factory, all Danzo needs is a dose of aphrodisiac and a hundred women. After 9 months, he can obtain up to an additional 50 pairs of Byakugan. Man, I don't think anybody's gonna forget this.
1yr
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MarinXGrayfia
MarinXGrayfiaLv4

dude he nerf mc

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MGED1555
MGED1555Lv1

Neutered? The most logical thing would be to kill him.

Mamur:Actually, there's something I've always wondered. Why wasn't MC castrated when he was kicked out of the clan? The Hyuga Clan are maniacs who will mark the entire clan with the seal of slavery to prevent their kekkei genkai from leaking out. The fact that he is blind does not change the fact that he is still a potential Byakugan factory, all Danzo needs is a dose of aphrodisiac and a hundred women. After 9 months, he can obtain up to an additional 50 pairs of Byakugan. Man, I don't think anybody's gonna forget this.
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MGED1555
MGED1555Lv1

The most logical thing is to kill him and not leave even a bit of his body without ashes, let us remember that in their wars they even looted the bodies because from their corpses they could loot the secrets of the clan.

hero4hire:yea, my question exactly. Taking out the eyes does nothing if he got captured by another village or defect and used as a breeding mule. The most logical scenario would've been to neuter him or put a seal on him regarless since his action open up further dessention within the clan.
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DaoistPCowBD
DaoistPCowBDLv4

Blind character in naruto is an interesting idea but author collected all cliches from chinese MS stories and dumped it right from the start. MC feels like cardboard(and of course everyone wiil praise him as an geniues, exept his chinese style enemies )

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madtitan
madtitanLv12

I trust this author but for gods sake pleasee focus on 1 story at a time. You havent even completed your other 2😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

1yr
DaoistH7599X
DaoistH7599XLv4

A big fat nonsense, descriptions, plot, MC, all of it.

1yr
AllSeeingBedroom
AllSeeingBedroomLv4

Forced plot but still a fun read if you turn off your brain as the author lacks some basic knowledge of the Naruto series so you may need to just say F it and accept what's happening.

1yr
Lucien7
Lucien7Lv12

This work was pretty cool until chapter 15, from then on I felt a headache just looking at it. The protagonist does unnecessary things and as if he wants people not to like him worst of all and the system asking him to get 10 pairs of sharingan in the uchiha massacre and he just entered the academy... Even so he goes out killing a root ninja like if it was nothing.

1yr
bytter_sirup
bytter_sirupLv4

why do cool ff concepts often tend to flop due to horrible execution? My main issue is with the MC. The guy rips his byakugon eyes out due to not wanting to be controlled by the hyuga. What if he didn't receive a system? what then? he'd be blind in a ninja village he knows will be attacked almost destroyed multiple times in the span of a few years. why not let the system come to him first and require him to blind himself to gain access to it? Cool concept, wasted potential.

1yr
Jeremy_Stone_1106
Jeremy_Stone_1106Lv1

The author is destroying his own novel by this forced ino romance non sense. This is why the rating is significantly dropped. It's not too late to fix this problems.

1yr
Jeremy_Stone_1106
Jeremy_Stone_1106Lv1

The romance is really forced, it became very cringe I mean ino? Please🤣 ..... This is why the ratings dropped,, I think you should consider love interest......

1yr
Guionista
GuionistaLv1

It's such a pity that from being one of the top best Naruto stories, it turned into just another mediocre one. It had so much potential, the main character could have developed really well, but there was too much drama, nerfing, fillers, inconsistencies, and other issues. This story was the best in my opinion, with a new and interesting theme. But as the saying goes, 'the higher they rise, the harder they fall.' Unfortunately, this story fell and couldn't rise again. I wish everyone good luck. Goodbye, and until we meet again.

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