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Disinterested in this one because it was too far divorced from any kind of overarching plotline. Like, there's a plot, but it's just Sukuna hanging out with a bunch of anime girls and getting free stuff from his system.

Heavy water (1) isn't purely theoretical (2) mostly unrelated to purification of water (3) has lower surface tension than non-heavy water.

Really slow pacing. Fifteen chapters of him being a kid, and he's done very little. Like, I get that he's too young to practically visit dungeons, but at least have him start leveling some skills or something. This story is in dire need of a timeskip.

Pacing feels very slow. Every chapter feels like it's been stretched out to be three times as long as it needs to be. Every detail needs a couple paragraphs.

Enjoyed it so much I lost track of time, and had to start writing my final essay two hours before the submission deadline. Based on this, I'd say it was pretty good.

PEAK! PEAK! PEAK! AUGH, it's so mf good. Just tens of chapters of nonstop combat, breakthroughs, and near-deaths. But also, he keeps getting his ass kicked and he keeps teaming up with allies, so the story stays interesting overall.

Actual genius

Ok but then how did he manage to turn a fall into a roll? That's some video game shit, right there.

You may not like it, but this is what peak Webnovel fanfiction looks like. Really long childhood arc which is somehow way more fun and engaging than it should be. Then, the author tries to add a romantic subplot and you cringe as you read it. THEN, the author starts a tournament arc, and all the drawn-out fights between all the side characters are so boring you start wanting to cry. Oh, and it was kinda cool that the protagonist was a child in their first life, you don't see that very often. And the childhood arc was generally pretty good.