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2023-06-06 09:18

I just can't read this any further. I dropped at like chapter 6 or whatever the number was but... it is just ridiculous. Chakra refining, the objective incorrect descriptions said by other characters, and the Chinese vibe kills it for me. One example would be calling a kid smart for gouging his eyes out. It doesn't add up

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i never called MC smart for that but I called him smart for doing this in front of Konoha village people, so that the elders of Hyuga clan cannot kill him because of pressure from Hokage.

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And the hyuuga don't give a f about the him. They literally have a clan of slaves. The old f**ktard won't care too, look at all the s**t Danzo does, not to mention literally wiping out two clans (Uzumaki is a country ig, and Uchihas)himself for "the greater good." And eliminating the hyuugas won't do the village any good so he would cover it up and win their favor instead. If he can't even cover up a small mess, like a kid gouging his eyes out at a hospital where people just watched as he got treated (which also makes no sense) in the fking deputy dean's office, he should be long dead. Your story just irritates me with its odd logic despite having read only 6 chapters. If you disagree with this, let's agree to disagree

Hkj:i never called MC smart for that but I called him smart for doing this in front of Konoha village people, so that the elders of Hyuga clan cannot kill him because of pressure from Hokage.
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