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bytter_sirup
bytter_sirupLv41yr
2023-06-08 18:25

why do cool ff concepts often tend to flop due to horrible execution? My main issue is with the MC. The guy rips his byakugon eyes out due to not wanting to be controlled by the hyuga. What if he didn't receive a system? what then? he'd be blind in a ninja village he knows will be attacked almost destroyed multiple times in the span of a few years. why not let the system come to him first and require him to blind himself to gain access to it? Cool concept, wasted potential.

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malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

Seriously, would you allow a seal to be struck that can kill you at any time? It is so normal for uchia eyes to change hands that they can implant a normal human eye with an organ transplant. because people can even take an eye with their hands and attach it to themselves. I don't understand why they didn't do it to mc.

Jakob_Timm
Jakob_TimmLv1

Maybe as punishment because he destroyed his eyes himself. For the clan he destroyed his worth as a ninja they couldnt control him longer. If it would be possible more ninja would change to normal eyes to live free from the seal.

malinizgeldii:Seriously, would you allow a seal to be struck that can kill you at any time? It is so normal for uchia eyes to change hands that they can implant a normal human eye with an organ transplant. because people can even take an eye with their hands and attach it to themselves. I don't understand why they didn't do it to mc.
malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

not if it were possible. because the original author didn't think of it. or because he couldn't think. The higher your level as a ninja in hyuga eyes, the less useful it becomes. cannot be compared to a uxhia eye. that is, during the Christmas, people may not even see their eyes themselves with normal eyes. but if the bird cage is applied, it means death when the eyes come out. and slavery. The original author didn't think of that. but also this ff author didn't think about it either. He plans to make a special eye for mc with 10 uchia eyes and 10 hyugiya eyes. which is so ridiculous.

Jakob_Timm:Maybe as punishment because he destroyed his eyes himself. For the clan he destroyed his worth as a ninja they couldnt control him longer. If it would be possible more ninja would change to normal eyes to live free from the seal.
FluxleX
FluxleXLv4

bruh i would rather be a slave to someone so i can live and use my advantage to grow stronger rather than go on the way to the so called freedom where i will lose my sole huge advantages (on the condition i did not know about system) byakugan, what do you think will happen to mc after he became blind without his system, i can bet my on life that he would be dead either by starvation or some random rouge ninja, who will give mission to a blind hyuga ( like dude BLIND HYUGA lol) people would rather just call them civilian ninja so. nahh

malinizgeldii:Seriously, would you allow a seal to be struck that can kill you at any time? It is so normal for uchia eyes to change hands that they can implant a normal human eye with an organ transplant. because people can even take an eye with their hands and attach it to themselves. I don't understand why they didn't do it to mc.
malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

byukugan is just as useful a kekke gengai as jonin. He almost can't outdo anyone else in jonin and above. maybe it applies to other power but not byukugan.

FluxleX:bruh i would rather be a slave to someone so i can live and use my advantage to grow stronger rather than go on the way to the so called freedom where i will lose my sole huge advantages (on the condition i did not know about system) byakugan, what do you think will happen to mc after he became blind without his system, i can bet my on life that he would be dead either by starvation or some random rouge ninja, who will give mission to a blind hyuga ( like dude BLIND HYUGA lol) people would rather just call them civilian ninja so. nahh
Mr_mysterio
Mr_mysterioLv3

you just have to become a seal master and destroy the one you have

malinizgeldii:Seriously, would you allow a seal to be struck that can kill you at any time? It is so normal for uchia eyes to change hands that they can implant a normal human eye with an organ transplant. because people can even take an eye with their hands and attach it to themselves. I don't understand why they didn't do it to mc.
malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

I totally agree with this. You need to find out secretly because Hyuga will be watching. Besides, he'll have to learn it from someone or he won't learn it fast enough. The system is not something that will support this. Also, I think I left this novel around the 30th chapter, there is no need to discuss it anymore.

Mr_mysterio:you just have to become a seal master and destroy the one you have
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