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AllSeeingBedroom
AllSeeingBedroomLv41yr
2023-06-04 18:04

Forced plot but still a fun read if you turn off your brain as the author lacks some basic knowledge of the Naruto series so you may need to just say F it and accept what's happening.

Naruto: Blind Hyuga

Hkj
3.2
241 Chs

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malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

can you give an example

1yr
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MK0
MK0Lv1

Br aqui. Ele não pode

1yr
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Kuroi_Kaminari
Kuroi_KaminariLv4

El elemento tormenta, es rayo y agua, no rayo y viento

malinizgeldii:can you give an example
1yr
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king_of_kings666
king_of_kings666Lv4

I totally get what are you saying

Kuroi_Kaminari:El elemento tormenta, es rayo y agua, no rayo y viento
1yr
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DeathE
DeathELv14

the storm element, is lightning and water, not lightning and ???

king_of_kings666:I totally get what are you saying
1yr
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DeathE
DeathELv14

wind?

DeathE:the storm element, is lightning and water, not lightning and ???
1yr
Other Reviews
TeraBaapHuMai
TeraBaapHuMaiLv3

Deleted my 5 star review which was at 5-6 chapter, idk. But the premise of the story is one of the best, heck this has the best hyuuga idea out of all ff i have read. But the execution, oh my god, it's so bad, so many plot holes. He should add more tags like, brainless mc, overpowered mc, forced plot, etc. So people like me can escape it. But 5/5 stars for stability of updates

1yr

DaoistPCowBD
DaoistPCowBDLv4

Blind character in naruto is an interesting idea but author collected all cliches from chinese MS stories and dumped it right from the start. MC feels like cardboard(and of course everyone wiil praise him as an geniues, exept his chinese style enemies )

1yr
madtitan
madtitanLv12

I trust this author but for gods sake pleasee focus on 1 story at a time. You havent even completed your other 2😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

1yr
DaoistH7599X
DaoistH7599XLv4

A big fat nonsense, descriptions, plot, MC, all of it.

1yr
Lucien7
Lucien7Lv12

This work was pretty cool until chapter 15, from then on I felt a headache just looking at it. The protagonist does unnecessary things and as if he wants people not to like him worst of all and the system asking him to get 10 pairs of sharingan in the uchiha massacre and he just entered the academy... Even so he goes out killing a root ninja like if it was nothing.

1yr
bytter_sirup
bytter_sirupLv4

why do cool ff concepts often tend to flop due to horrible execution? My main issue is with the MC. The guy rips his byakugon eyes out due to not wanting to be controlled by the hyuga. What if he didn't receive a system? what then? he'd be blind in a ninja village he knows will be attacked almost destroyed multiple times in the span of a few years. why not let the system come to him first and require him to blind himself to gain access to it? Cool concept, wasted potential.

1yr
Jeremy_Stone_1106
Jeremy_Stone_1106Lv1

The author is destroying his own novel by this forced ino romance non sense. This is why the rating is significantly dropped. It's not too late to fix this problems.

1yr
Jeremy_Stone_1106
Jeremy_Stone_1106Lv1

The romance is really forced, it became very cringe I mean ino? Please🤣 ..... This is why the ratings dropped,, I think you should consider love interest......

1yr
Guionista
GuionistaLv1

It's such a pity that from being one of the top best Naruto stories, it turned into just another mediocre one. It had so much potential, the main character could have developed really well, but there was too much drama, nerfing, fillers, inconsistencies, and other issues. This story was the best in my opinion, with a new and interesting theme. But as the saying goes, 'the higher they rise, the harder they fall.' Unfortunately, this story fell and couldn't rise again. I wish everyone good luck. Goodbye, and until we meet again.

1yr
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