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When The Fallout Comes

Author: Dowaray
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Read When The Fallout Comes fanfiction written by the author Dowaray on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Video Games fanfic stories, covering r18, system, videogame. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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Ray McAllister having a recurring Nightmare where's the world end is near. Armed with that knowledge he will attempt to save his friends and family. (sorry for the bad grammar etc. its my first time writing and as per usual Fallout is the property of Bethesda Softworks) Here if you want to support me : p@reon.com/Dowaray or https://ko fi.com/dowaray

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THE GIRL AND THE GHOST

THE GHOST KNEW his master was about to die, and he wasn’t exactly unhappy about it. He knew that sounded bad. You’d think, after all those years together, that even he might have felt a twinge of sadness about the whole situation. But it’s hard to feel sorry for someone when: a) you’re a ghost, and everyone knows ghosts don’t have hearts, and b) that someone made her living out of forcing you to make other people miserable. He stared at her now as she lay on the narrow bed, gray and gaunt in the light of the full moon, her breath rasping and shallow. Watching her teeter slowly toward the end was a bit like watching a grape slowly become a raisin: the years had sucked the life and vitality out of her until she was nothing but a wrinkled shell of her former self. “Well,” she wheezed, squinting at him. Well, he said. “One more for the road, eh?” she said, nodding to the full moon out the window. And she grimaced as she offered him the ring finger of her right hand, as she had done so many times before. The ghost nodded. It seemed frivolous, but after all, he still needed to eat, whether or not his master lay dying. As he bent his head over the wrinkled hand, his sharp little teeth pricking the skin worn and calloused from time and use, the witch let out a sharp breath. Her blood used to be rich and strong and so thick with her magic that the ghost could get himself drunk on it, if he wasn’t careful. Now all he tasted was the stale tang of age, the sour notesthat came with impending death, and a bitter aftertaste he couldn’t quite place. Regret, perhaps. It was the regret that was hardest to swallow. The ghost drank nothing more than he had to, finishing quickly and sealing the tiny pinpricks of his teeth on her skin with spit. It is done, he told her, the words familiar as a favorite song, the ritual as comforting as a warm blanket. And I am bound to you, until the end. The witch patted his horned head gently. Her touch surprised him —she had never been particularly affectionate. “Well,” she said, her voice nothing more than a sigh. “The end is now.” And she turned her head to the window, where the sun was just rising over the cusp of the world, and died.

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Uncle_Roger_main
Uncle_Roger_mainLv14Uncle_Roger_main

Good stuff so far, I like the character and his decisions .I feel like you should speed up his plans a bit though or speed up the story a little.

sourwood
sourwoodLv3sourwood

Started out strong then the Author decided that he wanted to write a completely different story halfway through that has nothing to do with the setting or the previous story apparently.

Dowaray
DowarayAuthorDowaray

--------------------------------------------------------------- Move along there's nothing to see here just the author selfish review! Anyway I give all my thanks for those who read this Fan-fic. ---------------------------------------------------------------

ThatOneGUy
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more plz @author [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14DetachedDreamer

I've always wanted to read a fallout fanfic and hoping this would be one. sadly it seems more like a prequel. maybe its leading up to the story, which i hoped would be base building and focused on preparing and the safety of him and his loved before the fallout. it may well hit on those subjects but it seems more focused with normal daily life there, and it seems this'll drag on forever honestly. been waiting months to finally get to the story line but that doesn't seem to be in the plans. I think the story was rewritten but seems like years before it'll reach the point I anticipated. Not a bad story if you aren't expecting a full on fallout story for the next year or so.

JokerHighJack
JokerHighJackLv10JokerHighJack

It’s alright the writing, grammar, and structure of the story is really bad. I was disappointed because the author has such a unique idea but the execution is just not there. The main character makes some weird and dumb choices even though he is suppose to be so smart. The fallout vibe is just really not there either. The worst part is the dialogue it’s very weird and not realistic for people to say.

David_Delgado
David_DelgadoLv12David_Delgado

Pretty good story I like the character choices you made if you have mods with this fallout to be even more interesting what if you had a mod workshop after the bombs fell that be interesting but anyway keep up a good work I love to read more your stories soon.

asdasdssf
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Pretty disappointing. Story is mostly just badly written high school slice-of-life and some gang stuff. And worst of all author abandoned any realism. He has magic inventory and he can even craft stuff like in the game. Inventory is totally op, and so is crafting system, mc doesn't need to do anything, system does it all -.-

demioch
demiochLv6demioch

I'll change my review if you plan on keeping the teacher, the gf, a few more girls like the gang boss and give them kids lol don't think poorly of me just gives a uniqueness especially since they've been doing it raw I can only assume she's pregnant already

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KuramaTobi
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Make a discord, maybe ask for help to get it edited; it’ll be even better than it is now.

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A única coisa que posso dizer é, a história é boa e peço o autor que não desista, pequenos erros são inevitáveis e a toxidade do ser humano também, se fosse fácil ser bom em algo isso não seria considerado um mérito, continue na luta irmão!

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