G2l

This fanfic is very weak, the plot is 10, but the author didn't know how to handle it well.

Dead or live

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This is why kids should not rewrite a fanfic... you restart it and it comes to nothing, the author recycles content and leaves it for 4 to 6 months, then comes back with a new chapter but no one reads it and the author stops writing.

This is why kids should not rewrite a fanfic... you restart it and it comes to nothing, the author recycles content and leaves it for 4 to 6 months, then comes back with a new chapter but no one reads it and the author stops writing.

Waaaaark

It's hard to read your thoughts and it seems to break the 4th wall like Deadpool, it changes very suddenly... it's entertaining