Review Detail of JokerHighJack in When The Fallout Comes

It’s alright the writing, grammar, and structure of the story is really bad. I was disappointed because the author has such a unique idea but the execution is just not there. The main character makes some weird and dumb choices even though he is suppose to be so smart. The fallout vibe is just really not there either. The worst part is the dialogue it’s very weird and not realistic for people to say.